I have too say ive fallen in love with this story since i love FLCL...I wonder where the real Asuka is?

Other than a few spelling/word errors, this was a nice read. ::chuckles:: Poor Shinji. ::snickers::

This is actually a surprisingly good fic. Quite original -- like an primeval sea of internet memes melding inside the head of a psychotic Lillith, ready to turn from Ammonia-Tang to bizzare silicon-based lifeforms the next time the Magi short-circuit.

This is gigglelicious! I can hardly wait for more!

Hello Dartz-IRL,

This fic is a little... odd, as you are aware of. It's really weird and I don't really 'get it'. It has me confused all over. The sentences are really crazy and I mean in an incoherent way, and filled with short standalone sentences that make up for an awkward reading experience.

I can tell from the first chapter that I probably won't enjoy the rest, so I won't bother reading the rest. Not as an insult, but just like how some people don't like to watch horror movies. This fic is just not for me.

Sincerely,

RahXephon

Not a bad opening, but you've already made one mistake. Well, its one only a musician or a complete FLCL freak would notice. Haruhara's old Bass is a Rickenbacker

This story is seven shades of awesome. I never thought I'd see an FLCL/Eva xover, let alone one done so well. Congrats on writing such a masterpiece, I can't wait to see what happens next
Vayne

Good work, Dartz. I like it.

lol, lemon scenes. Brilliant idea, chum. I will continue to read with the utmost attention. You need some "I'd [verb] her [noun] with my [noun], if you know what I mean..." innuendo in there somewhere though.

I just KNEW Haruko and Misato would hit it off. Tag team teasing Shinji like that was absolutely gleeful to read. I also like how you downgraded the storytelling format into a more script-like style. I assume it's to echo the part in FLCL where the anime gives way to pages of the manga.

Anyway, teasing = spicy and sexy. Can't wait for more.

...And here those nutfools in the second-story Anime Club back home tell me that FLCL is dead...

...Screw popular opinion. You are living proof that the glory that is FLCL is alive and well.

Just don't leave us hanging too long, or we'll send out the rabid Shi-Tzus after you.

lol, you posted this right after I watched the Wicker Man.

Keep up the good work...

"Still pootling along... don't be afraid to speak up folks... crickets... Don't be afraid to read my other fics either... or talk to me... or even say something... WHY WONT ANYBODY ACKNOWLEDGE ME!!...sobs..."

It seems we have a kind of slump for the moment, it'll get better soon. Maybe.

Dude...you know your story is good, we don't need to say anything any more.

Nuff said.

Konous

Good sir, I tip my hat to you. I'm sure there have been other attempts to combine the two most surreal shows ever to come out of Gainax, but I've never read any, and I doubt they would be as enjoyable as yours. You've managed to filter Evangelion's strangeness through FLCL's absurdity and it all feels so good.

I don't know WHAT to expect from this. There's clearly a connection between the summoning of Atomsk and Third Impact, and between Furi Kuri itself and the whole confusing mystery of AT Fields. I can't wait to read more.

"Still pootling along... don't be afraid to speak up folks... crickets... Don't be afraid to read my other fics either... or talk to me... or even say something... WHY WONT ANYBODY ACKNOWLEDGE ME!!...sobs."

ok :picks up chainsaw: now say "ARGH
MY DIGG-A-LING!!"