Just finished this, and I gotta say... I'm in love! Fluffy, hilarious, IN CHARACTER (can't stress that one enough). I have to say, Shiro-chan might have been my favorite in your style of writing. Of course Nanao, Shunsui and Ukitake were all flawless, but that goes without saying. :) Yachiru and Ken-chan were also extremely enjoyable to read. And that lucky bastard of a Tenth seat... he's rich!

Anyway, instant favorite! Keep it up, sir/madam. :D

beautiful imagery. fabulous prose. You've got me hooked.

AH, I LOVE THIS. WHO DOESN'T LOVE THE SEXUAL TENSION? Especially between these two, because it was just WAITING to happen, really. I love that Nanao totally kept him running after her, and Ukitake's assessment of how anyone who could get him to expend THAT much energy before noon didn't need to be worried about being cast aside.. XD

I love the whole concept of "being Zaraki'd", lol! And how poor Hitsugaya was so desperate for help with the paperwork. And the ending! Haha. So great :D

Zaraki'd.. :D My new favorite verb. I'm going to have to work that into normal conversations.
It will be a challenge, but totally worth it.
Also, nice reference with the Et tu (sp?) Ukitake? That was priceless. Outrageously original.
And I'm going to check now, but if you ever write a Zaraki fanfic, I will love you forever. (in a totally platonic way)

J'adore! :)

This is still one of my all-time favorite fics on this place. You have the perfect combo of humor and romance and action... or something. Fantastic. If I could give you cyber brownies I would. Lots of them. With frosting.

this went straight to the favorite stories section and my brain flash-stepped away too fast for a literate review.

zaraki, huh? want to see that one.XD

The best piece of fanfiction I have yet encountered on the internet. I read it every so often, and it always induces great glee in me. Actually, it reminds me more than anything else of Ouran High School Host Club, which I hope you will take as a compliment.

Incidentally, that you appear to no longer write fanfiction is a great source of tradgedy. I can only hope that you have progressed to earing millions from your fantastic prose.

Loved it. Was grinning like an idiot the whole time, especially at Nanao's inner dialogues. Wondeful job!

Oh gods, zaraki in love. I hope you write that. That idea is almost (but not quite) as wonderful as the idea of women who "zaraki" unwanted followers earlier in this fic. Which I am utterly in love with. And I am still laughing at. I suspect I shall spend the rest of the night laughing, as a matter of fact. Wish me luck in actually getting to sleep.

'm on chapter 7 now, and still laughing like a madman...

Oh my gosh. I'm only on chapter 3 and I'm laughing so hard I had to leave a review and let you know, because it would be just sad if you didn't realize how utterly delightful this is. Thank you!

omg, that was amazing. I was just looking around to find another ShunusuixNanao fic to read, and I came upon this. Really, I am impressed. You capture the perfect blend of humor and romance, it kept me interested and dying to know what happens next. The chase scene all around the city was pure genius. Genius. Being a writer myself, I have to acknowledge your excellent work, this seemed so natural, it flowed well and was well written. Excellent charaterization, stuff happened at the right moments-oh, there's so much to say. but thank you for giving us people who are bored crapless a way to pass time and liven up the day. I look forward to your next pieces of work.

-eulamarie

Man. I need myself a Shunsui. And a Zaraki for those inconvenient moments. I loved it! Hilarious, and romantic. Loverly!

OMG awesome fic you have here. I just love it. Is there a sequel?

Absolutely a wonderfully done tale! I was laughing out loud or grinning like a fool for most of the story. Your ablend of humor and knowledge of the characters was well done indeed. Your writing style was very smooth and enjoyable to read. Hitsugaya was a stitch, the image Shunshui being on fire, the limp body on Ukitake's pillow, and being Zaraki'd were priceless.

Thank you for a great read!