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Chaos Dragon
2008-05-10
ch 9,
abuseoh, my god. this was a work of great beauty. and hilarity. please, accept my humblest gratitude for such a great fic.

~cd
Azuvala Assantri
2008-04-29
ch 9,
abuseOh my gosh, that was so adorable! >w<
Sque! That was absolutely kawai, you are a MAGNIFICENT writer.
Wow, wow, WOW, I LOVED it! u
VioTanequil
2008-04-26
ch 9,
abuseBrilliant work! This is so simultaneously cut and hilarious! Really, just fantastic! I love the way you portrayed the characters, and the 'Zaraki-ing' of someone is just so cool! Fav line - “She went thataway.” Pure genius! XD.
WinterVines
2008-04-24
ch 9,
abuseYou've received quite a few reviews for this story, and you've definately earned it! I read this story a long time ago, but it was before I was a member. It's one of my favorites. I love a good laugh with a good plot. I thought it my duty to comment. Thanks for the very great read! -KG
C. Hardcastle
2008-04-19
ch 9, anon.
abuseI love, love, love this story. I read it every now and again after I've had a trying day (moving violation, leaky pipes, rodent encounter) and I am always grinning like a nimrod by the end. Thank you, thank you for sharing it.
birleywhirligig
2008-04-16
ch 5,
abuseGetting Zaraki'd... that is pure genius... and it's absolutely hilarious too!
lara5170
2008-04-15
ch 9, anon.
abusethat was great. I hope you do more.
Foenixfyre
2008-04-14
ch 9,
abuseOh, how I love and adore your writing . . .
mystice
2008-04-09
ch 9, anon.
abusethis is just fantastic! it's very well written and well thought out... i loved the humor and the new vocab "getting zaraki'd", lol! Ukitake is so cool too! I really enjoyed the 'chase', it was screaming 'sexual tension' between them.. haha, i enjoyed the ending too, the chase is still on, which proves that they'd be together for a lonng time to come.

I really enjoyed reading this so i hope there'd be more shunsxnanao fics to come! :)
shackleton
2008-03-31
ch 9,
abusei just reviewed your other story of 9 chapters that is really really good, so i figured i'd do the other one that's 9 chapters and really really good. the rutting boar line is the best.
also, i'm deep in love with ukitake and no one writes him, especially not well. i request more of him in any hm... future stories? or you could write about mayuri, who i loathe, or just pineapples, and i'd still review saying that YOU WRITE SO WELL hooray.
Selonianth
2008-03-28
ch 9,
abuseso she leads him by way of flash step to wherever they are going to be doing it and its become a reliable thing for her to pop into Ukitake's place
Aleigh Walker
2008-03-28
ch 9,
abuseRoflmao that was priceless! loved the flash chase hehe

A great read, thanks for sharing

Aleigh
Aiko
2008-03-18
ch 9, anon.
abuseI didnt quite get the first half of the story ...
Aiko
2008-03-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseUmm... I didn't quite get it...

What was "getting Zaraki'd"?
AnimePenguin
2008-03-11
ch 9,
abuseAbsolutely fell in love with this story. Enjoyed every moment from beginning to end. It was very well written, and all my annonymous friends love it aswell. The description and dialog was well balanced, the the humor and drama kept me going. I've read it several times, and also sometimes in parts. I hope you continue to write brilliantly, and especially more of this pairing. Truly a spectacular story! Loved it.
-Moni
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