I just reread everything you've written in this fic and it's still just as epic as I remember it. I laughed so much at this fic and it was hilarious to reread. There are so many spots where I kept inserting Roxas' next line to be: "I'm sorry, but I can't introduce you to my friends because I based my fictitious girlfriend off of you." MGWLiC is a joy to read.

The current chapter, chapter ten, wasn't so fun. Poor Roxas having all this Liam related **. At least he's finally gotten it out of his system and is able to move on.

Zexion is more awesome than imagined in this. I like him a lot here because you've written him so wheel. Demyx is also great.

Of course I'm worried about Naminé. I'm guessing it has something to do with lack of food/sleep or too much stress. The alternative problem that jumps to mind is just too horrid to comprehend considering everything that family has been through.

I hope you manage your updating goal because I can't wait to find out what happens next! If it takes longer than you hope, well… this fic's worth it.

-MC

I KNEW you'd update sooner or later! :D
I've had this story on my favourite list for forever, you've finally proven me right! Thank god I stuck with it because there's no other KH writer like you around. I don't even LIKE KH Fanfics that much, just this one. I do hope you won't let the dwindling reader number discourage you, I can't wait for the rest of this story and I hope it involves some serious action for axel soon. <3 keep writing and I'll keep reading! SO glad you're back :3

I love you. I am not even joking anymore. I ** love you now. You have made yourself officially on my list of best-**-ever. Congrats. :D

By the way, the whole 3-people left reading it thing is a load of chicken-**. Everyone I know that likes akuroku has at least in some way heard of-and appreciates- this fanfic more than most others.

You're a whole new kind of genius and that's what makes me happy. AND IT MAKES ME HAPPY. Go you, you just made someone's ** day worth while. GO YOU. *Insert generic thumbs-up-rape-face here*

holy **. axel is so sweet that i might get cavities. this story pwns. hard =)

Holy **, an update.

*glomps* THANK YOU! You updated! And even apart from the massive unbelievable awesomeness of this, I was having a really ** day today and I was basically about to go club myself to death with the Collected Works of Oscar Wilde due to the crappiness of it all, and I was like 'hmm, may as well see if there's - OHMYGOD NEW CHAPTER.' Total win.

Anyway, fic. Um, this is brilliant. And backstory! Yayzles! And lordy, I now have a mental image of a hyped-up Axel driving an Aston in my head, with Roxas just clinging on for dear life, which will keep me entertained for a long time to come. And, and, other assorted awesomeness. Anyway. And I heart Axel's ceiling-of-postcards. Just sos ya know.

~IS

This is amazing and wonderful and awesome and thank you SO MUCH FOR UPDATING! (>_<) This was an excellent chapter. I love it. Roxas's character definitely seems the type to suffer from a panic attack. I hope Namine's okay. (^_^)

Ep I read the entirety of this fic and thus made myself late for work yesterday, but I came back to reply! It's absolutely ace, I love Roxas's characterisation especially, it was nice and different from the general shy virgin thing I've been reading since I got sucked into the fandom. Axel is heaps fun too, totes one of those people you run into every now and then in real life but then never have the guts to say 'let's catch up sometime'. :3

ALSO! You totes surprised me towards this end of the fic, I kinda thought it was gonna be light-hearted and funny and whatnot throughout, but then it slowly sunk into something darker that I wasn't expecting but enjoyed immensely. Keep stepping, I can't wait to read more. :D

I love this story so much! Good job!

Your story is nice, I like reading it, I like seeing it's updated, and I would recommend it to other people.

However, I really like days, I find it very intresting when it comes to characterisation. I can understand people dislike some of it's content, and they are free to do so(I know I lost my motivation for one fic just because the atmosphere was completely off).

And your jab at Days actually kinda hurt.
It was really a let-down for me, to read this fic, and then to see you insult something(a canon something even) I really like, especcially because we're in the same fandom?
Maybe you could consider that next time?

Anyway, just wanted to express my feelings.

Another small thing.
You've got like, a million references in your fic, most of them toward literature.
And I'm Dutch, and most of those references fly way over my head, and I think I'm not the only one. And I was wondering, could you perhaps elaborate on your references somehow, somewhere?

Because at one point I went like 'Roxas compares himself to a ship? Why would anyone call a ship 'sea biscuit'? Biscuits would get soggy, and don't sound very water-proof.' Only to discover later it was this famous prize horse every American knows. And I'm just curious, why Anna Karina? Why the Running man? What is your motivation? Etcetera.

Just a thought.

Hi! This review might come out of the blue but I must be one of those really hidden lurkers in the KH fandom, who happened to fall in love with how you have written Axel and Roxas in this story. I hope to read more about them, especially now that you've built up those little details that made Axel and Roxas their own persons.

I don't have mad reviewing skills (hence my tendency to lurk) but I just wanted you to know there's someone waiting to read more.
^_^

So about how much is left of this story?
It really doesn't seem that close to over, and it's so good that I must say I hope it isn't.
Fanfiction was effing up and wouldn't let me review most of this, but it's finally working right again, so here I am.
Love it all, but some of your references go way over my head.
When I get them, I wonder if I'm having an intelligent moment or you just dumbed that one down.
Ahaha. Nobody's made me use a dictionary more!
Anyway. That's not necessarily bad, since I'm being forcibly educated by a story that I couldn't put down even if I had to translate it from Hebrew with Google. Okay. That's a lie.
BUT. I do love this.
You made original characters okay. They're not usually, for me.
So, hope you get the next chapter up sooner rather than later...good luck with the writing and stuff.

...holy **, someone knows Albany ** exists. Not only that, they know about AMC. I think I may pass out from shock. You have made my night. Is your knowledge from personal experience, or internet research?

Now, it's been forever and a day since I last read this, but it was totally worth coming back to for the Smallbany.

did you know you're this amazing writer that i absolutely adore? you're so intelligent in your writing unlike other fanfiction writers. i love this fic paired with all thhe allusions and creativity.
you're a brilliant writer and "my girlfriend, who lies in canada" is my favorite fic :)

Thank you so much for the story so far! I can't wait until the next update! ^_^

Hi, I just want to say thank you SO much for updating! It made me really happy to see the notice. I really like this story and I think your doing a good job with it. So PLEASE don't change your mind and drop this story. Thanks again! ^^