did you know you're this amazing writer that i absolutely adore? you're so intelligent in your writing unlike other fanfiction writers. i love this fic paired with all thhe allusions and creativity.
you're a brilliant writer and "my girlfriend, who lies in canada" is my favorite fic :)

Thank you so much for the story so far! I can't wait until the next update! ^_^

Hi, I just want to say thank you SO much for updating! It made me really happy to see the notice. I really like this story and I think your doing a good job with it. So PLEASE don't change your mind and drop this story. Thanks again! ^^

I really, REALLY love this fic. I read seven chapters tody. In one sitting! I don't do that with. . . well, ever actually. This has the perfect amount of humor and angst to satify my Akuroku/General Kingdom Hearts/(and surprisingly enough)Zemyx craze. I was captured from the begining —can't wait for moar! ♥

So I've been frantically plowing through the other chapters so I could get to where this is right now, and I gotta say, you've left one hell of a cliffhanger...Before this chapter, for me, the cliffhanger was, "Wtf are you doing, Roxas, you like him, he likes you, why won't you kiss him?" And then it was "Okay, you kissed, but...did you like it? Are you even bi? Wtf?" I suspected that there was something with Liam when I heard about him, but w/e. That's been cleared up...Overall, the story's almost too dramatic to be realistic, sometimes, but I still like the story. Your diction is excellent, your character development is divine, and you actually have a plot lol. All things that I love! :D I definitely wanna see more...
Until next time,
-LFO-

Now, if everyone wrote like this, I would have my sorry nose stuck in books all the time. Or probably not, if everyone wrote the same if would be immensely boring... MY POINT IS, your writing style is unique and interesting and makes me want to sit for hours on end reading whatever you write. It could be about butterflies and casinos, I wouldn't care.

As for this story, the plot (at least the obvious bits of it) aren't that original or anything, but it really doesn't matter because of your amazing way of writing. Some of the smart-** things your write makes me want to bang my head against the keyboard with a smile on my face.

I really hope the you're able to finish the story in the not-too-distant future. I'll be keeping an eye out.

Well I'm reading - again after the longest break from this. I just came across this and decided to check the new chapter, and that got me to re-reading the older ones. Now, I'm sort of addicted. And it looks like I'm not going to get much more than (max) six hours' sleep tonight. And I blame you. Goosh I'm gonna be tired tomorrow, school will be exhausting.

This chapter was...kind of strange. I'm not sure I got what was going on all the time. It was somehow very...fuzzy. Or is it just me being tired?

Till the next one. ^^

Ewewewewewewewewewewewew you wrote out the full name for X...Dx Gah, I'm reading to ESCAPE my organic chemistry homework, not have to dive into it again Dx Damn you, IB Chemistry...

This chapter was fun :3 I've never read such an un-canon Roxas before. Its refreshing. By the way, are you an aspiring writer? It feels as if you write Roxas with your own memories and emotions

I defintely think other readers will agree with me when I say this story is just too good to have the readers reading dwindle down to a total 3.
(:

Yes! Update!
I've been following this for months and months, since I first got shepherded into the KH fandom and now update!
Totally agree on 358/2. I'm finding it so hard to write Roxas now, he just sounds like he's about seven. Makes it really difficult for me to write a darker side to him.
But this is still utterly amazing. If you manage to wrap it up by Christmas, I will be exceedingly impressed (but also maybe a little sad)

I really like this, especially how you describe Axel. He's even more odd than usual (which is a good thing for your information,) Roxas is doing a great work getting tangled up in the web of lies of his, and Olette worries too much. Pence's pretty cool, though XD

However. I really do like it, and I'm looking forward to next chapter ^^

This story is awesome, and I'm curious on how it's going to end, and how the whole 'pretend girlfriend' thing will work out. XD That would be awkward to explain to crazy friends. 'Oh btw, I don't even like girls!'

Oh my goodness! Everytime you update this fic, I squeal and scream, "NEW CHAPTER OF MY GIRLFRIEND, WHO LIVES IN CANADA IS OUT!" Why is that? Well, because it's awesome, of course!

Hm that whole past with Liam was a bit unexpected, but hey, it works for me! XD Stupid Roxas has been gay this whole time and yet he hasn't made the moves on Axel. Shame on you, Rox! *hits* Well, what can we do? I loved Axel's room, by the way. And Slaughterhouse Five; that was a wonderful book. XD

So... Axel wore his chucks again... Lol, I'm going to try and pretend that my inner fangirl isn't squealing. I love those damn shoes!

Lol, 358/2 Days wasn't so bad, but it did sort of kill our idea of bitchy, badass uke Roxas. He was kind of a chibi-clueless uke at the beginning of the game. He didn't earn badass status until the end. Lol, oh well.

Please update soon. Or I just might have to find you. *creepy smile* Haha kidding.

-Savvy ♥

ASDLKJASDKLJDSAKL. OH HOT DAMN MY REVIEW IS SO LATE. but i thoroughly enjoyed the chapter. 'twas as amazing as usual. you always, express the human side of emotional so intelligently, so beautifuly. i love it so dearly. X3

liam is such a my-first-gay-boy archetype, lol. XD the tension between him and roxas is marvelous. mixed in with the bitterness and anger and sadness and regret are jealousy and the ache to love and be loved. it's easy to empathize with feelings like that. they're such human feelings and all.

"'She was just, I don’t know, my shiny new thing.'" lmao. so much trophy wife potential. XD

oh my god. THE POSTCARDS. SKDHSGSKLDHG. that's so amazing and yet so incredibly sad at the same time. i think you described it perfectly here: "A man who had lived so much life but was still so greedy for it that he wanted to take it with him, have it surround him all day, every day..." that's just such a gorgeous way to simultaneously describe him and the human condition.

'358/2 Days of **', eh? rofl. that's certainly not at all a satirical allusion to a certain video game. XD

johnathan safran foer~! everything is illuminated is the only thing by him that i have read and it was quite awesome. :3

"Desolé, Madame. Desolé, Monsieur. Desolé, desolé, desolé…" this made me sad too. it's hard to explain why. but you can feel the regreat in that simple word and regret is a haunting sort of sorrow.

oh god. drama llama strikes again! your dramatic scenes are absolutely amazing. coupled with your humor, your chapters seem so complete because it portrays both sides of emotion -- the lighter side and the darker side.

zexion is so awesome. personalities like his make me flail. X3

i love that you put focus on axel's converse again at the end. there's just something about them that make his character even more spectacular. also. ROAD TRIP! HELLS YEAH. :D

Oh I missed this so much!

lol I adore your Axel. But maybe I adore more your Zexion! He sounds awesome...

Thank you for being like Britney! Thank you for not abandoning this, even if your writing has been emo... Which I think it happens in every story at some point... But it's all good, and I do like a lot longer chapters. It fills the void of long time with no updates!

Keep up the good work! I love this bat-** crazy story!