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| The Tiramisu Of Impending D... 2008-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseAh, this is very sweet. The writing style is simple but expressive, and I really think you characterized them all nicely, especially Ed. That last scene is really touching! By the way, I definitely see it as a friendship fic. Sometimes people just automatically want a pairing when they read about a guy and a girl but of course there are more complex relationships than that! Anyway, I'll shut up now, but thanks for sharing this fic! |
| Krisymkk 2007-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow cute! You should definately continue this. |
| Kari-Kun 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI'm guessing you're the same person who review my story on fictionpress. (Correct me if I'm wrong) Sorry. Out of your long list of stories, I jsut had to choose a short one. I don't have much time right now on the internet, but I'll get back to it. I like where this one is going though. I particularly like One-shots..^^d :thumbs up: I liek FMA too(along with a long list of others), but I like Ed alot. ^-^ |
| Harryswoman 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusethis was really great! |
| Janika 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. You have Winry down so far, and the chapter did more to set the scene for something it foreshadows...but what could it be? A new menace? An OC? But what's the time-frame? When is this happening? Before the Philosopher's Stone is made or after they meet Dante or what? It's been a while since I read your stuff. You still got it! |
| S J Smith 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseCute li'l story. Points: Ed and Al usually stay at a military hotel and they're anything but posh. *laughs* Winry usually has a room next to theirs in the stories so far but has yet to share a room. Ed sleeping on the couch is not out of character. *grin* It's fanon rather than canon that Winry's afraid of storms. FYI. However, I'm kind of fond of the "Winry's scared of storms" story, so. Cute story, like I said. Hope you keep writing. |
| Syolen 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseAw… That was sweet ! Please write more ! |
| LittleChemist 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseVery cute! |
| CaRiMaiLSKiTTleS 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseaww that is just too cute^^ i love rain and storms to! cause hey like, are a misic lullaby to fall asleep to! well, a last to me.. heehee |
| causmicfire 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done! I love Ed's explanation of storms--it really suits him. keep up the good work! |