Aww! The relationship between Naruto and Jaraiya is so cute! And hilarious, mustn't forget hilarious. Ah... Indeed, theres truly nothing funnier than the child being the figure of authority.

I love manipulative characters, but they're one of the hardest to create and therefore are rarely used as protagonists. Such a shame. Hence your fic is awesome. And Genius. Pure Genius. But I already said that.

I am in awe of your Genius. Score: 11/10

... The 'mother' in narutos dream is being very hypocritical -_- she tells him to stop sayIng tou-san when her nickname for naruto is naru-CHAN.

I love how their roles are switched; naruto being the 'grown-up' who has to fix everything and jiraiya being the 'kid' who ruins everything.

this is amazing

Feelin' like I found the gold pot. I recently got mugged, didn't fight back, took my phone and ran.I need to take actual fighting classes... Aikido didn't help me much cause I'm without a phone.

One of my top pet peeves.
"I'm doing this for you"
If your love one is hurting... You're not doing them any favors.

Another reason why I love reading finished stories.

It goes "dun, dun, dunnnn"

I go "Next Chapter! :D" *clicks*

Naruto is such an emotional wreck, yet everything looks like it would be fine :D

Lol. :D
It's peanut butter jelly time, peanut butter jelly time,
wuehh nyon, wuehh nyon

Closer... Closer... Have you ever read "How to say Goodbye in Robot"? One of my favorite books when it came out back when I was in high school.

I'm hungry.

Love it so far, the riddles are awesome :D my Dad and I like to learn riddles and then tests each other with them, it's really fun xD

Hahahaha don'tbe like the british!