Aww, Ling is Ed's bastard. How cute! They are meant for each other, aren't they. They do make a cute couple. I look forward to future fics from you! Maybe even a sequel to this ending?

AW, this was a worthy sequel I say, I really liked it! Good job!

Ed has hot eyes, obviously, and very worthy of description. I like this story.

This is a perfect follow-on, I just loved every second. I felt like crying for the two of them XD

*Sniffs*

Loved it ...and the song lyrics fit so perfectly...

you writing anymore or not...i really love it...could you write more...phulease?!! *puppy eyes*

I image of Ling and Edward on their knees with their backs to a cabinet... Wow, that's really going to hautn me for a while. Beautifully written, and very sweet. Wonderful dialogue, also. Fantastic job!

as good as scars