Beautifully executed, and brilliantly written.

Well done.

Nice fic. I liked how you kept referring back to Selphie's dancing (and the hidden message it held in the end) and the memories that came back afterwards, but you kinda made me a bit lost half-way through talking about Irvine and Selphie recieving flowers from some random cadet. I thought you were kind of going off the topic, but thats my opinion. Well written, watch a few of those grammar/punctuation errors and you'll be fine. Thanks for writing.

I enjoyed this one-shot. The use of language, metaphors, etc was well done and the take on relationships (Irvine-Selphie, Squall-Rinoa, Squall-Selphie) was superb.

5/5 from my point of view, because I think this one-shot did what it set out to do just fine.

This was a really interesting piece. I definitely enjoyed reading it. I think I always pictured Quistis as her "serious friend"
I really like the way you've made me rethink interactions and relationships, thank you for writing. :-)

What can I say? I love you, and I love this story. I totally think that Squall could get all brotherly with Selphie, because you're right, they do act a lot alike. And I like all the parallels you drew, and the way you characterized both of them, and even Rinoa and Irvine on the side, and...

Pretty much everything else. This is a beautifully written and wonderfully constructed piece, definitely deserving of much more than a paltry handful of reviews on a website, but alas! What more can we give? If I could make the rest of the universe read and review this fic, I could possibly die happy (actually, I'll be honest and selfish and admit that I'd rather they read and review mine first, but this is definitely on the list!)

You certainly have talent. Why haven't I seen anything from you before? Hmm. Will be looking into that.

Love muchly,
Touch of Gray

Wow, I never thought about that, but I agree.
That was really good.

Absolutely lovely. :) I'm a fan of SelphieSquall, platonic or romantic, and an even bigger fan of Selphie in general. You've characterised her beautifully, and I love the parallels you've drawn. :)

Very nice. I'm a huge fan of squalphies...You should write one :)

Really good. I loved how you likened Squall to Selphie. They seem so opposite, but when you look harder, they do both shut people out, and are quite similar in their own ways. Selphie seems so cheerful, yet she does have an introverted, darker side. I love how this fic conveys that, and the friendship between Squall and Selphie. I think a Squall/Selphie friendship is generally better than a romantic relationship, and this fic shows it. I really enjoyed reading this. It was a bretah of fresh air for me. Thank you very much! I hope you do more fics like this! x