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| xD 2007-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseupdate =) |
| OTHlover04 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusethat was good |
| Kogoro 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseIf you put aside a few of the misspellings in the story, then this is a great first chapter! We get a lot of info, but it's greatly aceented by a language that encourages understanding and flow in story-movement. I just can't believe that Jess could be so cruel to Joe. I never could make up my mind who he should end up with in the film, but i guess I've always been rooting for Jules in one way or the other. Great first chapter out, and April Princess, just so you know; you're gonna do just fine, I'm sure! I'll be rooting for you too ;) "A great writer once said that even though you had a lot of bad ideas in your head, you should still take one bad idea, and work with it, until it turns out something good. A bad idea is still a start, and you shouldn't overlook that" :D I don't know if that is gonna be any help to you two at all, just like the saying and thought to share it. Hope the next chapter will be coming soon! |
| anon 2007-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abusethis story totally rox!i cant believe there's only one review!i tink everyone shld review it!!great start!!im looking forward to chapter 2!! |
| KSP33 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start. I'm looking forward to a Joe/Jules story, but are you also going to run with the Jess/OC pairing too? |