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Reviews For: Just One Night

carlsoles
2008-07-24
ch 2, anon.
abusepls cont story
Stella Taylor16
2007-08-17
ch 2,
abusei love it. but i hate peython

when will you be doing more?
Murgy31
2007-07-18
ch 2,
abuseGreat story, Please continue soon...
magic-munchies
2007-07-14
ch 2,
abuse:D! Shouting is right up my alley :P I like!
ukgurl17
2007-07-14
ch 2,
abusei love it coz its smacked but she is a mug for believing him lol.
cant wait for the next chapter :)
mj0621
2007-07-14
ch 2,
abuseLOL tension...

my imagination is forming these scene as i read your fic:
stella:no. im mad at you
mac:i'll give you a cookie
stella:i'll take the cookie but im still mad at you

XD LMAO

ok,macky behaving now? O_o; *pokes mac* just NOW?! *gg*

-mj(wgf)

PS: tis ok. practice makes perfect. ;)im not good in english either (im asian- Philippines to be exact) so i know what cha mean.thanks for updating fast (unlike me LOL). loving it. keep it up. :D
magic-munchies
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseI want to hunt Mac down with a meat cleaver after this! Please update soon! Pwetti please *trys to do doe eyes*
Serienjunkie 91
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abuseOMG! Poor Stella!

That's so bad of Mac. I hope you write more soon to let us know what happens next. ^^ *pretty please*
bubble-rouge08
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuseOMG, that hurts so bad... I feel bad for Stella.
mj0621
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abusekinda hard to read but its okay ;) no biggie.

situations like this make me mad at mac *pokes macky*
whattanass...
>:(
ill hunt him for hurting stella. ;)
nice idea btw.

-mj(wgf)
vipercharmed
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseMac was the biggest ** in the world, u cannot just have sex and then leave.
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