Aw

hm interesting but you left it open are you going ot make another one shot to continue it. I hope you do its a cool story.

cool chapter!x! cant wait to reaad more.

Aww you left me hanging great story though. I'm a big RYRO fan.

Ah! What happens? Does John die? You can't leave me hanging like this! Great one-shot by the way!

-Ally