YEAH!! GRIMMJOW WON! HE BEAT HIS A$$! too bad this doesn't really happen T-T I LOVERS GRIMMJOW LOTS!! AWESOME FANFIC! XD XD XD

I loved it! (even though it doesn't have any smut ;D)

Interesting, actually. For such a short blurb of a fic, this certainly catches attention. Grimmjow is quickly advancing in the ranks among my favorite Bleach characters, and (despite how much I want Kubo Tite to let him live) I'd expect him to have a dignified death. As cruel, crude and violent as he may be, there's something about his character that simply screams that he is only a victim of circumstance, and that he could have easily fit in with that rag-tag good-guy/ally group. Well, whatever. Basically, I love Grimmjow, and this was a lovely drabble.

Wow this is really good. Cheza sure has a good base for a story if she uses this! I love the idea- very original!

Your writing is good enough to make it into a story. Why did you end it? Anyway this chapter is amazing and I simple love it however, it would be good to get a story out of it and maybe a love triangle between Ichigo-Inoue-Grimmjow and Aizen raping Inoue, Huh? Anyway I love how you end it with
"Grimmjow collapsed on the stairs just outside the main doors, turning his back on the palace shaking itself to pieces. "I win, Aizen-sama!" he mocked, his voice a liquid gurgle. "I win." He turned his face to the sky and waited for hell to claim him.

Damnation.

Salvation.

END"

Pretty good. I hope I can see more works from you with Grimmjow in it and no Ichigo and Grimmjow please I seen to much dissapointments.

From a Orange and Blueberry Fan
ColdPersianFusion
writing for the damned