Reviews for One Nation Under God

Reviews For: One Nation Under God

creative-writing-girl13 2008-07-23 ch 1,	abuseThat was really good
Lionfire5224 2008-05-12 ch 1,	abuseLook, I love this, I really do, but there is a reason that this, (and your other poem under Jesus Christ Superstar) have been reported. This and your other fic belong in the Bible section. Jesus Christ Superstar is a musical, and from the looks of your profile I don't think you'd approve of it, seeing as it's a rock opera about Jesus's final week on Earth. The song "Gethsemane" would drive you nuts despite Ted Neeley's gorgeous voice because it questions a lot of things the Bible says. So, for your own good, stop posting spiritual writings under this category unless they actually have to do with the musical. I'm seriously trying to be gentle about it. In your profile, you aske why would there be a Jesus Christ Superstar section if it weren' meant for writings about Jesus, but you misunderstand it. So, please, re-post this in the Bible. The Reporter is right, you are likely to get banned if you keep this up. ~Lionfire5224~
Adi Sagestar 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseThis story belongs in the Bible fanfiction category. I am trying to unclutter this category, so if you could move it it would be much appreciated. Regards, Adi =^.".^=
lalakid87 2008-02-11 ch 1,	abuseI think it is very good. Uhm I may be wrong, but I think you forgot to capitalyze God, He and Him sometimes.
kathryn 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abusehey that was wonderful, very well thought of. im glad i read it :D god bless
Neon Ferret 2007-12-28 ch 1,	abuseOk this is a fine effort but there are a couple of things I'd like to mention. This catagory is for Jesus Christ Superstar which is a musical so this shouldn't be here. A big problem I had with this is it implied that people who believe in God don't do drugs or anything wrong for that matter, they do, not all of them, not even most I'm sure but some do. Also not everyone who doesn't believe in God does drugs and such, a lot of them are good people. You would get a lot more people looking at this if it was in a different place. Maybe if you found a site for religion stories and poems (I'm sure there are some) you would find a more supportive evironment. Have fun and keep writing, Neon Ferret :)
snowstargirl 2007-09-30 ch 1,	abuseExcellent. You asked a very good question. Are we, indeed, a nation under God? He made us, but are we trying to live under Him? We should be. We should try a lot harder. Thank you for posting this!
nolapeep 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abusethat was beautiful. U really did a great job.
REYKUN KINUTA 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abuseWOW, THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL. IT REALLY TOUCHED ME
Double G 2007-08-06 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is so great and so true. I enjoyed it very much and am floored by it. Great job!
BekaJWP 2007-07-28 ch 1,	abuseThat's not poetry. That's a rant with over-zealous use of the 'enter' key. If you're going to post original fic in this section at least try harder than this tosh! Reported.
The-Reporter 2007-07-15 ch 1,	abuseOriginal story. You have been reported.
renthead22 2007-07-03 ch 1,	abuseGreat job! I love it. As sad as it is, the poem is so true!
Simaku 2007-07-02 ch 1,	abuseNice poem.I kinda enjyed it.

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