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livin and breathin
2009-01-31 . chapter 1
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TIGER! AND NO IT DOESNT MATTER WHAT DAY IT IS!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! great fic!! absolutely marvelous!! splendid job!! wonderful!!brownie points all around!! WHOHO!

livin and breathin
moonreader
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
As sweet, fluffy, and throughly enjoyable as this was, I must admit that my favorite part was envisioning Snape's peas hurling themselves at other Slytherins ;) I don't suppose you want to write a fic about that...? :D

Anyhow, I would note that in any sentence such as "Happy Birthday, Lily," there is a comma before the name. Other than that, wonderful work, and I look forward to reading more from you!
devils.come.in.pairs hitachiin
2008-10-19 . chapter 1
That was adorable! Your writing is fantastic!!
WanderingChild96
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
I really liked this! This is the first Harry Potter fic I 've read on the site, and I'm glad it was! Really nice job!
RubberPlant
2007-12-31 . chapter 1
Very sweet :)
books4evah
2007-12-06 . chapter 1
Yeah... happy late birthday, I guess, to not really you... okay.
Great story!
greekfan14
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
Loved it.
Tiger-Cub684
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
aww, thanks so much, Shoey! this is the bestest birthday present i've ever gotten. It could only be topped by my 'real-life-james' asking me out. But this sure comes close. thanks you so much! you're the bestest friend a love-sick girl could ask for! thanks again so much.
it even softens the fact that my 'james' is away overseas for the next 3 weeks.
thank you again. you have no idea how much this means to me.
-hugs-

We siriously need to find the time to work in MAT.

yay! now i'm in a fluffy mood. thanks buddy! i'm not forgetting this. you just wait until you're birthday comes around.

-hugs- bye! -smiles-
Karajgil
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
ok first of all i wish someone had done that for me on my birthday... which is July 2nd! lol i had to read this cuz it was called the seond of july. it was good though i liked it a lot
redglasses
2007-07-03 . chapter 1
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Tiger-Cub684!
Anyway, loved the story but there's NO KISS!
lol
Sorry! hehe, I'm a sucker for fluffy romance! =)
Still loved it though!
Keep writing lj!!
redglasses
StarryNightT
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
AW! that's so cute! i
stinkabhel
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
You know what? I planned never to get married! But now, I'm beginning to want my own James Potter! Haha, don't take me seriously. :)) BUT YOUR STORY IS AMAZING!
Agnes Green
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
aw that was too amazingly cute
i love the subtlety
:]
thestralwhisperer
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
haha happy bday to your friend, i'll admit i was confused why they were in school in july
cheese_bits
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
good, but i was expecting a kiss at the end. well drawn out though.
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