great fic! :) i love barbosa and elizabeth, u write them very well :D

"It all started with a kiss."

I don't think I'd be able to stop with one kiss with Barbossa either! He knew that once their lips met, that would be all it would take with Elizabeth, but I like how he didn't push her towards her decision. But you stopped before the best part!

Yes. Nice. Stopped to soon but great.

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Just lovely. Good smut, not the "OH GOD TMI!" kind! XD

Thanks for sharing luv. :)

luvs

squee

Very nice. It would be a pity if you let this end here.

Wow, that was a really great story. Make a sequel!

What does it say about your fellow Barbossa fan that I jumped right to the naughty little oneshot you wrote featuring a seductive Barbossa? ;)

Had to come over and check things out after the lovely review you left me.

I must say that I'm not disappointed, other than the fact that you ended this where you did!

'He smiled now to see her already weakening in his embrace, hating herself for enjoying the encounter and loving herself for allowing it to happen'

This is a fabulous line.

'The laces of that former life had been severed, like a corset tied too tightly, and the relief was just as welcome.'

And this one too!

Nicely done!

Cheers!

OK, so I've already reviewed this before, as haleyXsparrow, but I just had to review again, at my new account. So...

WOW! I totally loved the description you used for Barbossa here... 'He had an odd way about him; gentle and passionate, a bit like Will, confident and sensuous like Jack, and yet altogether unlike anyone she had ever known before.' -That was absolutely brilliant!

And this line as well, really stuck for me...'The person to whom she lied the most was the same one that stared back at her from the mirror every morning...' that sounds so much like Elizabeth!

This story was just filled with so much passion and raw desire. Barbossa and Elizabeth were exactly in character, and I enjoyed reading this very mich[:

Sincerely,

HoistTheColours

(adding to favorites by the way.)

I agree with swampmusic! Did you really have to end it there! lol

OMG. Did you HAVE to end it THERE? HEH I loved it!

Wow! great job mate. Really and truly well done. Very sexy. And very much in character. Honestly, even after seeing AWE, I can still see Capt. Barbossa and Elizabeth together. In fact, AWE really reinforced the pairing to me. Jack and Will are boys that Elizabeth easily manipulates and plays with, not so with Barbossa. And anyway, Barbossa is just so much hotter! Well done again mate!

this is amazing:]

Nice!

Ah, fantastic, I love it! Another good Barbossa fic from you. Keep them coming, I love to read about Barbossa for a change. I love his character almost as much as Norrington. Anymore, that is all I read, Barbossa or Norrignton fics.

You just rock with writing Barbossabeth fics CX You always capture the characters dead on and its great :D

I would never even considered (or at least thought) of this pairing until I stumbled across your fics :B

Keep of the fabulous work :D