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| Silver-Serval 2007-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really cute, I enjoyed it! |
| GreaserFreak13 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! I liked it. I liked the end bit... And besides, they might come back. They'd forgotten the coffee. That was the perfect ending. Somthing Soda would do. |
| dreamer 3097 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abusethis is a nice one |
| tomisaqt 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved how you created Katherine's character. I'd like to see if Ponyboy ever meets her as his mom, but yeah I agree that I wouldn't want him to become all lovey-gooey mama's boy to her. I'll be looking for more from you! |
| Girlz-Rule 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abusegreat oneshot:) |
| xodamhsoirxo 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abusehah yes it was Megh :P I have problems I know. I did like how you created her though, I must say, excellant job :)And if you'd like Pony to go all Mommy on her, I suppose you could because you're right, tis fanfiction. I'll try to give it a fair shot if you do decide that though :) |
| imgonnaliveforever 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved that. i dont think i got a chance to review your other story, i cant remember. I loved how you did Katherine's character, she is so believable. And you got me thinking now what connections you can have to someone in a grocery store.ya no? is this a one-shot??you got to continue. |
| edwards other bella 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abusegreat story...at least we got a little more from his mom... |
| SamanthaMae 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseYou made me log in. I'm so lazy. Anyway, I really liked this. That last line, They'd forgotten the coffee, made me laugh. I bet Ponyboy was too daydreamy and Sodapop just forgot about it. I could see it happening. I like how this woman doesn't really know Pony was her son. It would be unrealistic if she was just like, "I suddenly realized I knew this person..." But by having her barely reconizing him just made it perfect :D Oh, and I probably won't get to it tomorrow, so Happy Birthday! |
| OneManShow 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. =] I really liked the last line. It was a great closing. |