So creepy. So wonderfully, wonderfully creepy.

very nice :)

O_O Wow...I like. :D

Oh Lucy.

-YES.

The ending of this was fantastic, and I love the coldness and amorality of Lucy in this, and that you got the Doctor Who feel to it, the right accent and rhythm to the words. I was sort of attached to Lucy by the end, in a horrible way, and the sheer...yeah, you got the villains right, very much so.

Nice. I like Lucy as thoroughly evil, self-justifying, somewhat tormented and no one's puppet. A good, twisted end for the Master and his companion.

The thing with the soap reminds me of British imperialism a lot..."soap is civilization."

I really, really love the ending.

But every patr of it is interesting, totally fitting in canon but adding some meaning to Lucy's character.

...Wow. That was - haunting and heartbreaking and chilling and perfect. I think you've captured Lucy's pathos perfectly, and her troubles on the Valiant, and the ending...

Just. Perfect.

..Nice! :)

Interesting and just a touch chilling. Everyone seemed very in character.

Lol! Bravo, Lucy! You're as evil as your husband!