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Katlynn888
2008-02-02
ch 1,
abuseYAY! I dunno if you should continue it...but there is something left to be desired...dunno...*scratches head and things* nope, still nothin'...*Knocks on head. there is an echo* well, that was weird...

lol. I lvoed it. maybe you should continue it.

-Lynn
MariShal
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseVery cute! I love how Mac always smiles with Lindsay :-)
Bronzelynx
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseVery cute. Of course there would be nice if you continued this ... seems kind of like the potential continuation of "Gradual Change", doesn't it? Anyway I enjoyed it and would enjoy another chap.
an-angels-light
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseCake! There is nothing cuter than these two and cake.
Dina
2007-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm loving this...

“Don’t worry, I won’t eat all of it.”
“How nice of you,” Mac chuckled.

I can totally see that happening! Great stuff!
danielle
2007-07-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved the last parts about sharing and her not depriving people of cake. One shot or more is ok she me. I hope you write more stories for them.
MeredithandDerekfanforever
2007-07-08
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. I would love to read more Mac/Lindsay stuff from you.

Brandy
xyber116
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseGreat fic.
Mishelle20
2007-07-05
ch 1,
abuseThis was so cute! I loved the little twist on the end.
jeffandjimmieschick
2007-07-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is so cute! I hope you add more to the story! I love Mac and Lindsay! They're my favorite CSI:NY pairing and I so wish they would have happened on the show instead of Danny and Lindsay.
lullabymoon
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseLoved it. Flirtyness (sp?) is alway good especially when it comes to these two. And you managed to work the tie scene in! Woohoo!

More would always be welcomed with open arms.
MeltyFan
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseNice! I love it when they flirt, hehe. And I'd be the first in line to read chapter 2!
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