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Reviews For: Shadow the hedgehog: Mephiles

billy arratoon
2008-05-30
ch 7, anon.
abuseWho is the hooded figuire?
Kiba Sniper
2007-07-10
ch 9,
abuseNICENESS! Attack of Mephiles' rage! He sure was tempting, with Shadow's slight emo behavior there!
The All Real Numbers Symbol
2007-07-10
ch 9,
abuseRomantic.

Not bad though.

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol
Mystery001
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abuseWell done, a very good story. Just try to space the paragraphs out a bit more, it all seems clumped together and be sure to use correct punctuation before and after dialouge.

It's not a flame, just a couple of suggestions. Great story though!

-Mystery
Kiba Sniper
2007-07-09
ch 8,
abuseGee, deep for Shadow.
The All Real Numbers Symbol
2007-07-08
ch 7,
abuseOh boy, now it looks like Metal/Mecha Sonic is getting in on this too.

The plot thickens.

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol
Kiba Sniper
2007-07-06
ch 6,
abuseWhoo! Silver and Shadow duke it out again! Awesome.
The All Real Numbers Symbol
2007-07-06
ch 5,
abuseNot bad. :)

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol
Kiba Sniper
2007-07-04
ch 3,
abuseSo, what your saying is that Kumori commited suicide? Just kidding. Little Rouge and Knuckie, hah!
Kiba Sniper
2007-07-04
ch 2,
abuseOMG! THE ATTACK OF THE SHADOW RECOLOR! That's what I really thought when I saw Mephiles, I recolor. I swear, Mephiles is the toughest name SEGA thought of.
The All Real Numbers Symbol
2007-07-04
ch 3,
abuseJust Rouge needed, to flatter herself. -_-'

Anyway, good job with the chapter.

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol
The All Real Numbers Symbol
2007-07-03
ch 2,
abuseOhh, Mephiles is back!

You're doing a good job with this story.

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol

P.S. Thanks for subscribing to my C2! :)
The All Real Numbers Symbol
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseOhh...that last part was cool.

Post more soon please.

L8R

-The All Real Numbers Symbol
Kiba Sniper
2007-07-02
ch 1,
abuseALL YOUR SCEPTORS OF DARKNESS BELONG TO US!
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