oh, okay, I get it now...this is about Suze's and Jesse's daughter. or son, i cant remember, josh has the proud family on too loud. Anyways, i just have a question, with...jesse's headstone... it wouldnt be there. because suze changed the past, and jesse didnt die, remember? so he wouldnt exactly be buried...would he? just a random thought, but its good, its like megs style. however i am dissapointed that you didnt include jesse in here, no more jesse and suze fluff. :( i love it all the same though. O and thanks for putting me on our top reviewers list! :D

What happens next?

Hmm, interesting name. I have never met anyone named "pretty" before... I don't quite understand why Jesse's past would have been kept a secret... Good start, though.

ok kind of wird, but kool
u keep riting
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wrty544

Really inetersting. I'd really like to see Bonita sking her parents about the whole thing. And of yourse jesse's and Susannah's reaction to her finding out. Good story. I liked it.

hey...i thought this was pretty good! Really good actually. Maybe you should continue it on...

Laura x