Love it!

Your stories have the best written endings. Loved this. The thoughts it ended with. Deep
I'm supposed to be a well rounded critique but I cannot seem to find any flaws here.
One of the best things about your writing is the detail with which you describe everything. That gives a better picture of what you imagine it to be like.
I spent a lot of time shortening this review to make sure it does not give you a headache, but alas, I think I have not succeeded.
Anyway, I love your writing

wow...fantastic...I love the Blue/Chatoya fics. There is something compelling about their relationship and I love finding different aspects to it. - Lenna

Wonderful words, as usual. Spun like a cobweb, leading us in to wait for the spider. And oh, "we're going to see the fairies?" ... "WE'RE GOING TO SEE THE FAIRIES?" I heart Blue and Toya! Their conversations never cease to amuse me. Hope to see more writings, cheers and take care.

- dash

I want them together so bad, and it seems with the one shots that theyre taking baby steps there... I loved how Chimera ended, understood why Blue betrayed her in the end, but I love seeing them together like this... More one shots please... = )

It astonishes me how great your work is. I was speaking to a friend of mine a couple weeks about LJ Smith's books, and remembered TTales, and my mind made its way to your works. Ryars Valley. The characters there have such depth to them. They take a life of their own in my imagination, playing in my dreams after I read one of your stories. You may have borrowed the Nightworld
concept from LJ but this is definitely your own universe.

Then a few days ago I got onto FFN after being off of it a long time, just browsing through my review history, seeing which stories I had favored. I found another of your stories that I had reviewed, recognized the name and had to go to your authors page to see what I could find. I was not disappointed.

I'm thrilled to see that you've kept writing (the last date I saw was 7/07) and would encourage you to never stop, but I get the feeling that you couldn't stem such creativity. I can't wait to see what else you put forth.

That was beautiful in a really disturbing way - kind of like Chimera was.

Rather liking your current Blue/Toya oneshots, although I like the ones where Toya wins better, just cos it's fun to see someone wipe the smile off Blue's face.

Well-rounded critique. Hm. I think your strongest writing is your dialogue and speech tags, and your strongest plotting is the way everything in Toya's life comes back to the death of Sonj. You maybe overdo the use of similes and metaphors slightly in descriptive passages, but that's my only criticism.

Looking forward to your next piece, and hoping perhaps to see the return of Circle Strange.

as always, this story is perfectly written. I love the blue and chatoya stories and I hope they never end! This one especially, because it represents the complexity of their relationship and how far they have gone...or how little anything has changed.

Your stories are excellent and I hope you never stop posting. I'm sure many people agree, but don't take the time to write a review.

Simply superb. I adore the way you play with Chatoya's humanity and Blue's lack of humanity. I can't wait until you write something else. I am still eagerly awaiting Lisa O'Chai's installment, can't wait until you have finished! Keep up the magic, take care

Hmm.

As always, I love reading anything centered around Toya and Blue. Words can't even describe how much I love reading your work!

Wow! This was a great story! I love the love-hate relationship between the two, and you dig deep into the pschological part of their relationship as well. Overall it was great.

I recently started reading your Chatoya/Blue series of stories, and I am really hooked! Their stories are so captivating, and you, my friend, are a great writer.

I do love your Chatoya/Blue series. Always so psychologically thought provoking, and very dark. This was just another one of the good ones.

a beautiful last couple of paragraphs; though one wonders if she will manage it, or if she'll become the very thing she fears becoming trying to stop the decent. there's such a sadness to this; a sense of bowing to the inevitable. the way you captured both of them, and the cruelty of the fey, was equisite.

I didn't know that something could be dark, horrible, terrible, and beautiful at the same time until I started reading your stories. The darker Fey (or Fae, or the Fair Folk- whichever incarnation they may be) are every disturbing/intriguing thing that I would expect, and this is another story guaranteed to give interesting dreams. Thanks very much for writing this lovely story- I'll be back to read it again.