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Sas-UKE is a teme! I kill you!

;_; Saskues a meanie!What will happen now?And when will you continue this awsome story?

Pein: Hello my good woman or man...or it, I don't really know I'm assuming it, because no human could write something as vile and disgusting as this. I only read the first chapter and wanted to puke in my mouth! Oh... I just did nevermind. Good day to you!

Kakuzu: Now, I'll explain why he said that, because chances are your panties are in a bunch by this point and you're thinking of nasty things to say back to us. Okay, your character is extremely annoying and we haven't even read past the first chapter. Sakura and Ino have been degraded to make your character more appealing and it's just a mess.

Hidan: ** Mary Sue on the horizon I can tell. She's excedingly beautiful, just like me but I'm cannon so...Uh, anyway! Well, ** on my stockings, spank my **, dress me in a Japanese school girl outfit and throw me to a tentacle monster, this story is utter crap. Utter and complete dog jizz and crap.

That was great! Poor Motoko!

That was great! Poor Motoko!

i'm not logged in since i'm lazy anyways great chapter! update soon!

Two words:
Mary-sue :)

oh, my god! the mary sue levle makes me gag. i'm now offically ashamed of having purple hair. seeing as you've written 14 chappters of this trash, i can't think of a wat you can even try to save it. and this is coming from me, i've only flamed one person before in the two YEARS i've had an account.

update soon!! :]

Really good. Update soon!

NOO!! Way too short!! update soon!! : ]

I'm too lazy to log in right now. great chapter!

aww... update soon! : ]

yay! update soon : ]