I know this is my Third review but I like to review. So here it goes. I like it so far but could you maybe have Rai and Kim get along a little more. Not much just a little. Also You are on my Favorite authors list which has only 4 including you. I love your writing and also How old are you I mean one minute your 12 then 16 then 13 Did I miss something. Anyway could you mention me in your next page. If you don't mind I mean its just i'm new and I'm just trying to make myself known so please. I mean I don't even know how to make a description of myself. So please. =-) Again love the fic

Will you update? Cause I'll worship at your feet if you do.

Good story. Please update more often.

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That's all I can say. Did you HAVE to leave such a bad cliff hanger, when I KNOW you won't update for a while? Hmm? Gawd! *growls* I'm just kidding lol. Sorry I didn't reply to your emails and stuff, really busy, ya know? but, yeah that was a great chapter... Cheese. Wow. I'm going to find you something other to use than cheese. You remember last time I did that, I came up with poop for message? Wow, those were the days! hehehe... Okay, bye! :D

♥zesty♥

UPDATE! MEH! *Screams really obnoxiously*

Well, howdy! Took a little break, eh? ^_^

Nitpick: Should Rai be walking so well after slicing open his leg? I mean, shouldn't he be having just a little difficulty?

Darth Vader guy is Jack, isn't he? *evil cackle* If so, I wonder what part he has to play...

Whooh, blackout; Wu, or nature? I suppose I'll have to wait to find out.

Keep it up!

update!

Woo hoo! Their first acting job! I have a prediction, but i dont want to put it in, so im writing it down on a piece of paper and putting it on my bulletin board. The prediction is of what their first acting job will be. Either that or one eventually. Update soon so i can find out if im right or not.

P.s. I lose sleep over these things. Another reason to update soon!

AWSOME!! That is freakin awsome!!

god, you leave us at such a horrid spot! *cry* and I loved the fact that you put Kimiko into character so much in this chapter, being as spoiled as she is :D And the whole Raimundo thing with the Q tips and earrings... I loved that line, "I'm sorry Kim, but I think your earring is homosexual." Hiliarious!

Please update soon! :D

♥zesty♥

Raimundo is such a little kid. “'Jorge comes up from behind Rick and barely misses his back as Rick doges the blow! Whoosh! He tries to get back at him by shoving the sword right into his opponents chest. Sqesh! Jorge falls down do his knees,' he dropped the bobby pin, 'And Rick claims himself as the victor! But what is this?' he makes the Q-Tip swirl around as if confused. 'There is a slash on the side of his abdomen! Could this be from when Jorge tried to attack him from the rear only moments before?'” The pure awesomeness has me paralyzed.

And Kimiko eats pizza with a *kinfe* and *fork*!? Somebody smack that girl upside the head!

Update soon, Sara!

Your welcome for everything! And it's not my fault your story is ONE OF THE BEST.

WOO! I love this so much! It's funny, AND slightly suspenseful, seeing as Raimundo and Kimiko are alone together in an apartment without-

adult...super...vi-sion... OH NO! CALL THE POLICE! LOL

I love this! You are a great writer! YOU TRULY DO HAVE A GIFT! A talented gift! And thanks for thanking me in the story! (teehee that sounded funny...)

ANYWAYS, HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!

~Rairox64~

Nice story but, what about Toshiro? Will he regain the comfortable financial position Kimiko is accostumed?

Yay!! ROFL @ Raimundo playing with Q-tips and bobby pins xD Great chapter- DON'T LISTEN TO RANE! lol, update soon!!

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You luv my hyperness?
YA!
Me too!
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Sorry, me had cookies!
7 of them!
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Me luv this story!
Pwease update soon!


2hyper4life

Sounds like it'll be good. Can't wait for more!! :DD