aww! so sad Jack is such a mess!

great oneshot

Honestly, I really enjoyed the idea and the storyline, but it was a bit OOC. Personally, I think that 'A Mother's Lvoe' is your best writing and you are very in character in that fic. Great job and keep trying, I love reading your oneshots. This was one of your better ones that I've read lately, excellent idea!

so emotional! the lyrics of the song just added to the feelings and emotion put in that oneshot. i think that this style of writing suits you best, especially the way you wrote this oneshot. and it's great news that jack will get sober and try and find help in himself. hopefully it will work. great oneshot!

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omg! so sad! Poor Jack! great one shot once again Rachel! :)

Yeah! No more hobo Jack. I was sad when I saw he had that really bad beard...:(