I like the idea of Lenne leaving a note for Yuna. I don't think it's been done before.

Good job.

gd fic

^^ I love Shuyin and Lenne. I could see Lenne doing this, too. They didn't deserve their past.

That was really good, and I could imagine Lenne writing something like that if she had a chance to Yuna. I like the whole idea of them being friends and all, but yeah. I read it and it send shivers down my spine. When I played FFX a long time ago I wasn't finished with it and didn't have FFX-2 at the time, I looked at a site about FFX and I cried when they said Tidus was a dream. Lenne and Shuyin's story made me cry as well because it was so depressing. But anyways, I hope you keep writing!

i think this is really good! you can really feel what the chacaters are feeling...keep up the good work!