this seems really good and shouta i just think is great wanting to help and will there be more and also y did they kidnap temari ?

Sweetness. I like this, but I feel bad for the poor waterfall girl... well keep up the good story, and I can't wait to find out what happens

I can't wait for the next chapter! I like little Shouta, he seems like a sweet kid. -Waits for chapter six-
~Mizu No Mita

FIRST, THIS IS NOT A FLAME, JUST A CONCERN so dude, do you not like writing fight scenes or what? because at the end of the three year jump in naruto, the only jounins were Neji, Temari and I think Kankuro. Which means that Temari is easily one of the best of the best So there's no way temari would lose so easily. especially from something as tiny as being hit with a forehead protector =_=' sorry that just annoyed me a lot

besides that I really like your story so please keep updating

Hahahahahahahahah. Cute. Nice. Make more.

although its short, i like this chapter. i hope you can update soon. ^_^

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

aww i hate cliffies...please update soon!

YYEAY!LOVE LOVE LOVE! YAY I LOVE THIS STORY VERY MUCH KEEP AT IT!Try to make a sibling die out. If you want.

I love this chapter. I like seeing Gaara and Kankurou's interaction. Since this is after Naruto helped Gaara, I don't think Kankurou would be too upset with seeing Naruto. Still, it was funny to see Kiba and Naruto competing against each other. :) I had almost forgotten that in the previous chapter Shika had manipulated them into moving faster. Hahaha

i can't wait till the next chapter so please update soon!

I especially like the 3rd chapter. Please continue.

i hope the next update would be lot longer than the last two chapters... i like your fanfic, its just too short but. anyways hope you update soon ^_^

So far two brilliant chapters. Keep writing!

Nice story, update soon!