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| Freak of Something 2008-07-04 ch 35, | abuseI have one thing to say about your story- WOW. :) I like it a lot, and I can't wait until you update again! I want to see Uchi in there. XD And Shin, too- he can have a fistfight with Ryu over Yankumi. Just kidding! :P But I do hope to see them soon. Adios for now! |
| FS.Rain 2008-04-21 ch 28, | abuseWoo~! the preview leads to many beautiful concoctions of wild guesses!! Aish~ The lady that broke into the gents onsen is Imani? Post Soon! |
| FS.Rain 2008-04-08 ch 27, | abuseAW!! WOW!! HOT SPRINGS are full of excitement!! First things first, please take care!! Health is a lot more important! This is a long and very very enticing chapter! Hahaha... I can't imagine if I have been given a sponge bath... even if I'm a guy man! Hahaha... Well.. Let's hope that Imani didn't make any more 'silly' decisions... but somehow I think there's still a high chance of it happening. Lastly, I had a terrible crush with most of those guys in Season 1 and 2! Haha... I'm a mental flirt! Till then, POST SOON! |
| BlackJack7 2008-03-28 ch 21, | abuseI have to say, I always enjoy your fighting scenes. I was going to tell you about the whole back flips thing but I saw in your a/n that it was intentional. I only hope that if/when I write a fighting scene I can do it as much justice as you. |
| FS.Rain 2008-03-15 ch 26, | abuseYou know that you have got me subdued. Your plots are FANTASTIC!! It always amaze me when authors are able to come up with such complicated jigsaw puzzles and solve the mysteries as story unfolds. Hmm.. injury to the kidney... Can I be a little heartless and think that it doesn't hurt to lose one out of the two kidneys that we have? =X Aww... no previews... Post Soon Okay?! PS: Hope you're doing well these days. Take Care! |
| FS.Rain 2008-03-14 ch 25, | abuseYes! I noted a ShinKumi moment when Kumiko recalls for someone after Kujo became unavailable. I thought you may give it a RyuKumi possibility in this fic... Then when ShinKumi hint came about, I start to wonder... 'what's in this brain of yours?!' Haha, but I'm glad I can't see it through.. Challenges keep us going at it! POST MORE SOON!! |
| FS.Rain 2008-03-14 ch 24, | abuseLong long chapter!! very intense too.. Guess what? I felt uneasy about how Tsuchi is reacting to the behavior of Imani towards the rest of his friends, particularly Odagiri... I pray and hope for the best for Tsuchi! Post!! |
| FS.Rain 2008-03-14 ch 23, | abuseHey Girl, My bad, have gone Missing In Action for quite some time. You are always good at cliff hangers I say.. Hmm... I kinda mind that Odagiri kisses Imani that way.. I mean If I'm Tsuchi, I'm gonna be killing Odagiri you know?? Haha Well... don't tell me that Kenazawa opposes the couple? POST SOON! |
| BlackJack7 2008-01-18 ch 19, | abuseI guess your hints were really strong because all this time I was under the impression that she knew he was her real father. I am assuming we should now expect trouble from Junpei. Right? |
| BlackJack7 2007-12-27 ch 14, | abuseHahaha I could not stop laughing with Yankumi's "I am the picture of calm." Grins It was good to see Yankumi in this chapter and on a pretend date. I think that is exactly how she'll act (especially if the pretend date is with drama-Tetsu). |
| BlackJack7 2007-12-27 ch 10, | abuseI was going to review after I read a few more chapters but I had to review this one to let you know that even though I know that this is mostly an OC chapter, I actually found it quite engaging. I really didn't miss reading more about the regular Gokusen characters nor was I expectantly waiting for them to pop up. |
| FS.Rain 2007-12-23 ch 22, | abuseThat's a quick turn of events! For Kudou and Ren to take actions, and how some scenes ties with the drama... Hahaha!! you just have to point out the fact that the Gaijin teacher has an ASIAN father!! Anyway, I'm perfectly fine that Tsuchi made up with Imani. I truly hope that they will advance from just friends. |
| FS.Rain 2007-12-23 ch 21, | abuseYo!! Real sorry for not coming in earlier! This chapter sends chill... Kudou join hands with Ren? That's bad... real bad... Now, let's just see how bad this can be!! *Laughs* PosT more!! |
| BlackJack7 2007-12-18 ch 8, | abusechuckle... On review for chapter 9 I meant to say winding not windy... hehehe Sometimes I type to fast and my brain doesn't have a chance to catch up. Blush Anyway, who knows?! It... could also be a windy road... winks |
| BlackJack7 2007-12-18 ch 9, | abuseHey! Betcha didn't think I'd read the story. Winks The story is actually interesting. It reminds me a bit of your "A Girl for Rui". I admit I am a little bit lost since I don't know the season2 people so I worry that I am missing some inside jokes. However, I think someone like me (who hasn't seen season2) can still follow the story. I like the dream sequences to try to slowly hint at the mystery behind Imani. I won't write any of my speculations here but I expect a twisty, windy road all the way 'til the end. Grins I have plenty of chapters I need to read in order to catch up to where you are. I'm sure I'll see more yakuza involvement there. I'm looking forward to it. P.S. I still miss Shin hehehe |