 Anime Onnanoko 1/21/11 . chapter 1This was a really good story, I've never really taken time to think about the Ninja principles before...but I guess the 25th one would be hard to keep in some circumstances. (Btw it's Masashi Kishimoto) |
 Detallista 257 5/9/08 . chapter 1Oh this is a really interesting one-shot! I never really meditated about the ninjas principals but you made a point with the 25th principal. |
 EvilNaruto15 7/3/07 . chapter 1my chars i make burn the 25 rule, and good job |
 foreverloved 7/2/07 . chapter 1Wow that was really well written. Great job. I think it really captured Hinata's feelings. The end didn't seem weird at all, it fit. |