Cute story! I loved it!

made me smile, this chapter did.

my favorite lines:

"All this sarcasm is making me hungry." - that's true

"Our kid'd probably be spending too much time trying to shoot things with a toy gun and trying to get at matches."

not exactly breaking ground here, but its still pretty funny.

These are good, you should keep writing them. Roy's rantings never fail to amuse me XD

Haha! The only part I didn't understand is when Roy, uh, said/wrote "Hey! I'm already First Lieutenant!" Other than that, it was much enjoyed.

XD please update this.

I liked it ^^ You should update soon!

YO!
I was totally freakin out when Roy was talking/muttering/writing/ thinking about him and Riza getting married and having a kid. I'm a total Royai obsessive freak and I was so into reading that line over and over again. Wow, and Riza heard that. That's awesome. And Ed will eventually get in the picture. A-ha... ha-ha... ha...

Royai is so awesome. And Roy's di- I mean journal expresses it all.

Ooh-rah.

FLAMETAL-_-

It's very, very difficult to read this with a straight face (not even trying to, anyway). I love the manic way you write Roy, as well as how you wrote Riza; I could totally see their hypothetical kid doing something like that. All in all, very entertaining, and I look forward to the next chapter!
Take care,
~September's Nobara.

Hahaaha. I love diary fics and I love Roy. That guy needs medication, seriously..

LOL, awesome! Very funny and you kept him in character the whole time. Riza's input was great too. You gotta love the way those two interact. X3

YO!
I love this. I mean it's, like, so Roy. Y'know, him keeping a dia- journal... Yeah. Journal. It sure is. You also gotta love what Roy thinks about everyone's favorite sharpshooter!

"She has to stop brandishing her guns..."

Yeah. The day she she lays down those pistols and rifles is the day... that is no day at all. Even on the day she is buried (... not that she will be of course; Riza totally pwns!!), all her firearms will be buried with her! Mwahahahaha!

Yeah. Go Roy! And you too, Riza!

(... Dawg, this don't got manga spoilers, right? Cuz I'm only up to the english dates for the manga (btw, that's up to volume 13+)

FLAMETAL-_-

haha that was funi!
hope there's gonna be an update soon!

This is really kinda cute. :3 I'm having quite a bit of fun reading it! Please continue!

-Kay

Cute =) Very much in character