aww that was so sadly sweet *cuddles snape* there there

Aw...you're making me teary-eyed here!! My heart is breaking for that poor guy. After reading the last book, I'm pro-Snape and I can't stand how his love is so unrequited. That was so sweet and so sad.

Brilliant.

Oh, that was s little sad! I liked it though.

aw! poor snivelly!! [never called him that before in my life but hey, first time for everything!] this was so creative, and i can actually imagine that happening! and aww! harry makes snape feel sad! stupid genetics are tarmenting our dear potions master! you did really great with this oneshot, and i greatly applaud you on doing such a wonderful job with it! beautifully done and i cant see a way for it to get any better!
~Shi~

Very good.

omg! this was so good. lily and snape are slightly OC but its still awesome. you should write a sequel

Aww, that's so sad! Poor Severus! Great story, though! I loved it! Oh, I think Severus is good too! Yay, good for you!

Well that was a delightful suprise. I really like the way you kept Snape in character while showing the complexity of his emotions. And I love how you tied it to an Occulmancy lesson with Harry. Well done all around!

Aww, I hate Snape with a passion... He's not all that bad in this one. Its cute.

i highly recommend this to anyone who is literate. fantastic concept and execution!! DOUBLE-WHAMMY!