 RumorUnderOath 2007-07-03 . chapter 1wowz, very interesting...its slightly confusing but then its not, like its identify able, especialy at the end, when ken is describing himself. also you described black, but either you didnt do white or it was unseen to me, did you do it? or is it hidden in there,
ken seems to be prefering grey, and i almost see why. some people would like to think that they are totaly white, when that kind of purity is beyond human reach, and ken relizes this, and it gives him insight into them because he knows this.
anyway, a very nice story, will there be more? |