i think it is beautiful yet so heart-breaking at the same time.u did a perfect job.

This was a sad poem but really good and descriptive. Does Kohaku die in the anime series? If he does can you PM me?

Aw... that's sad...Good job!

that was amazing, i really can't describe it. great job!

Wow, very morbid here. And very well written. That is all I have to say.

Yideungbyung Kim

PS: Did Kohaku die in the manga? If so, PM me. XD