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Reviews for: What Makes a Family 2: Megan
eventyraren
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
what hapend to Amy? well we get to know it later on in the story? And how will Tails be as a father? Update soon ok.
Sonamy Angel
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
YeAh! this RockzZ!
the plot it's just unique. I never read anything about judges and all.
Lots of descriptive words! it's just adorable!
and I want to know what happened with Amy?

Great job!! Keep it up!
Angelus-alvus
2007-07-07 . chapter 1
Interesting story
stacie orico
2007-07-06 . chapter 1
Good story and can you please finish the first hold onto family that one was really good I added to my favorite stories list.
Wonderland's-Pokemon-Master
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
This is so cool! I love the storyline, and Tails is so cool too!
Ratchet McCloud
2007-07-02 . chapter 1
This is a good start. However, I must point out one inconsistency: You start off saying that Tails is a few months into his 15th year, but later on you say that Tails is 15. This is a contradiction; if Tails is a few months into his 15th year, then he has not celebrated his 15th birthday yet and therefore is only 14, not 15. All that aside, as I said, this is a pretty good start; I'd like to see where this goes.

Keep up the good work and please update.

P.S.: I apologize for being picky. It's just that I am obsessive-compulsive about correcting errors.
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