man you really need to continue with your story. it is good

any chance of you adding on to this?

I thought Jake was going to torment the Huntsboy a little, but I was impressed with his maturity-and the way you portrayed it. Nothing wrong with a happy ending!

wow

Will Rose remember?

This is good next chapter please :)

aw that was cute. I like how not only Rose got a second chance, but 88 and 89 did too. And greggy grew up more too it was good!