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Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr...
2008-04-30
ch 5,
abuseLOVELY! BEAUTIFUL! And... SCARY!! I was SO worried that he'd get caught! FREEDOM! I loved this chapter! It was extremely well written (just like the past four)! PLEASE write more soon! It has been so long and I kind of forgot what had gone on before!! I understand if you're busy, but if you ever get even the smallest oportunity, please write some more! I can't wait to see where this story goes! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Alana84
2008-04-28
ch 5,
abuseYay, a new update and what a fine one it was, I really liked it!

And yeah, I've to agree with you that the title sound more beautiful in French but I still think it'd have fitted very well with the English one too! I'm a big fan of the English language btw, especially the British, hehe!

And no hard feelings about the lack of updating; cause I perfectly understand that school can be tough and all that, so...I was merely afraid that you might have abandoned it! I'm happy to see, that it wasn't the case, laughs!

Now onto the promised review; as I stated earlier; this chapter was more than good and it was also very exciting, indeed!

Wow, that guard helped him to escape, cool! But I can't believe that they were going to have poor Jack executed like that over a small thing like that! But okay; so maybe it wasn't that minor, after all he did steal from a prisoner guard, oh well...

I'm very pleased he made it out in one whole piece and whatnot, hehe!

So what's going to happen now, please update soon, cause I cannot wait to read more...
Alana84
2008-04-23
ch 4,
abuseWow, I'm so amazed and I was totally mesmerized throughout the whole lot, so far; that is!

I love it, not only do I think the plot's amazing but so is the character description, especially Jack/Dodger, whoa, that was just dead-on, really it was!

And I absolutely love how you write and the fic is also very well written, well done!

You've simply got to continue writing, cause I need to read more, laughs! So please do and update soon...ps. I was wondering what's the meaning of the title?! (My French is almost non-existent, so that's way I'm askin', hehe)!
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr...
2008-01-01
ch 4,
abuseWow! I honestly don't know where to start - that's rare for me. Lol.
You are such a good writer! I love this story! I, personally, am always afraid to plumb the depths of the Artful Dodger's mind (mostly because I am worried that other people want to read shallow stuff)! You do this so well! Please continue, and, if I should dare to ask, more often! :D
Great job!
martycrazy
2007-12-01
ch 3,
abuseHey=)!
That's brilliant!Really!
I'm becoming more and more intrigued...!
Please, update soon!I'll be waiting ;)!
Charlene Bates-PropertyOfFr...
2007-11-25
ch 3,
abuseWow... this is really deep. I am definately intrigued! Please write more soon! This is VERY BRILLIANT!
Broken Amethyst
2007-11-25
ch 3,
abuseThis is so so so sad! But you are doing a great job=)

Keep it up, looking foward to the next chapter.

Cheero=D
martycrazy
2007-10-20
ch 2,
abuseHello=)!
I've just read your story, and remained stunned!
This story holds the kind of beauty that you cant easily describe, but leaves you awed!
Really really good job! I found the story amazing!
I really wish that you continue it...I cant wait to read how the story goes on!...it would be awsome!!;) Love the Dodger character!Amazingly portraied!! =)
Nessa Lynette
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseGood job! Nice descriptions!
White Stone
2007-07-06
ch 2,
abuse“Is man so pre-destined?” What an elementary question this character asks. sometimes I wonder
White Stone
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseYou paint a world which I gladly want to jump into! Dickens, I love you.
Jewell Copland
2007-07-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is really neat. I love the way you write. Keep it up.
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