Okay, first of all I must say that I totally love you're story. It's passionat, well-written and just completly awesome. Secondly...PLEASE DON'T KILL ANYONE! (Well, except Rad. You can kill him if you want) Anyway, awesome chapter, I can't wait 'til the next up-date so please hurry!

OH MY GOD! AH! HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FASTER! I'M LIKE SHAKING IN ANTICIPATION! But seriously that chapter ROCKED! WRITE WRITE WRITE! WRITE LIKE THE WIND! If you make this story have an unhappy ending for anyone except Rad, I AM SERIOSLY GOING TO BE EXTREMELY MAD! I hate unhappy endings. Like, you read through a really good story and get to the end and find out the main character has been killed off so everyone is unhappy. It's like "gee, thanks for wasting my life the last couple of days". So please please please PLEASE dont make this a one of those.

Hope Lori and Megs have more fluffy moments soon. Rad is dead meat!

this is starting to get good!...well it was good the whole time but you know what I mean...Rad...can I kill him myself? Please? Or have Megatron go tahkondo on his butt! It would be awesome to watch!

This is getting good. (which is to say that it's going from great to awesome)I wonder who's going to kill Rad first... Megatron or Starscream? Which to choose... then again, who has more of a temper? I think I answered my own question. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

That was great!

I so cannot wait for chapter 22.

TOTALLY AWESOME CHAPTER! ^_^

Good luck on chapter 22 and on your other stories too.

OH! UPDATE SONN PLEASE!

That is a great chapter, especially with all of the action and the cliffhanger. Love Bud's and Coby's reaction to when they found out that Lori is now seeing Megatron. I hope that Megatron would save Lori before it is too late.

GAH! The torture! The Torture! *crumples to the ground and starts falling on self like a milipede being attacked* The torture!

Girl do you know how bad of a cliffie that was!? I'm dying because of it my heart is beating faster and faster and faster! I can't make it stop!

PLease update as soon as you can! I'm dying here! I'm too young to die girl! I don't care if I'm older than you, but I'm still too young to die! Megatron! Make her update! Please! I'm her oldest sister and you gotta help me get her to update!

Well...awesome job...but the torture! *dies*

Rad, oh Rad, you know everyone works for Mistress Megatron and you know she could cut a piece of flesh off and feed it to your pouches...and then we can see how loyal a hungry dog really is!

Let me show Rad a magic trick. *puts pencil on table* I'll make this pencil disappear. *hits rad's head on table and pencil goes in head* Magically gone everyone! Magically gone! Just update Mistress Megatron and I'll do more. :D

Best one yet, don't take too long to update the story.

omg, i can't wait for Megatron to kick Rads **!! update soon!! :D

YAY!! finally an update! And it was such a lovely one at that!! I simply can't WAIT to read more! X3

Sweet! I'd like to see Megs and Lori bond as TF/ Human, i love that scenario...

That was great!