AWE! So sweet! I really like this story so far. You're doing a great job. Keep up the great work!

wow, can't imagine a happy ending but maybe.../?

Awsome as always my TF friend. I was about to ask you bout this fic a few weeks back. Now I'm gonna wait for the next one around Christmas/New Years for the next chapter. Keep up the awsome writing.

C.D.

oh, thats sad. poor megatron. i hope things work out soon. i'm really impressed how long this story is and how much the characters have developed throughout. i remember reading this story from the very begining and i'm proud to say its probably my favorite. i hope you update soon! :D

Oh ** the evil cliffhangers! XD

Oh, poor Lori and Alexis... I really do hope this is all part of your plan on making this story extra long because it's getting me more and more excited than ever! Oh god! XD

Wait! Could this be! *glances at Jessamine and Optimus* I have a feeling she's gonna affect his life in a similiar manner to what AlexisxScreamer and LorixMegs are going through. Oh yes! I sense it!

I bet that this is an intense chapter and I hope that both Starscream and Megatron could make the best decision so that they could be with their loves.

and the complications begin again...wonder where Lori's planning on going? To Scourge?

YAY!! NEW CHAPTER!!
and i know exactly what you're going through - i accidentally fried my laptop of FOUR YEARS and lost nearly everything. none of it was backed up. :(
but anyway, good chapter!! i really liked it, but i feel really bad for poor Megatron.. he cried!
can't wait for the next one!!

I'd just like to say that I am very grateful that you updated this story even after something so devestating happened to you. I don't know what I'd do if my hard drive crashed... (but I have backed up my stories and music so I guess it wouldn't be that bad)

Anyway, great chapter. I had a feeling that Lori would eventually leave or something along those lines. I do wonder where she went. I'm going to be random at say Egypt? X3

I wonder where Lori would know a place where Rad wouldn't find her?

Also you did a great job on Jessamine reaction of learning that the autobots and decepticons are actually REAL!

Good luck on chapter 27, your other stories as well having a great Thanksgiving!

That was great!

Awesome! Please finish soon!!

A new character? O is Optimus going to get a girlfriend!? Jessamine I like it. LOL! Great job on this story girl, I mean I'm so happy that you updated! I missed your stories so much and reading it right after all my tests are over makes it even better. Haven't had time to read anything so me is so happy!

Again great job and hope to see that you have updated again!

Megatron wants to take Lori with him... but he wants to rule the universe... but she wants the universe will be free... what will happen there? O__o or she will make him change by mind?

and Starscream...he will stay as an autobot? or return with Megatron? if that happens.. Alexis will kick his arft XDD

wo! awsome chapter. ^^ i loved it. i hope you update again soon.