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Reviews For: To Walk the Forgotten Path

Lyta Padfoot
2007-09-15
ch 1,
abuseInteresting idea - just one note. You wrote "Upon arriving at the Manor, Piper headed up to the nursery to be with Wyatt while Phoebe and Paige sat down in the sun room." Don't you mean Phoebe and Prue ?
guardian music angel
2007-07-29
ch 2,
abuseplz update! this is good!
Marcus1233
2007-07-29
ch 2,
abuseHmm...I thought you would have gone from the original plot from here on...but sadly, it isn't going to be so, right?

Anyhoo, you did try to twitch out the story so that logic prevail...since they can't orb, they use potions...
Marcus1233
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseWell, it is a scene from the series so the plot isn't yours...but I like how you used Prue for a twist.
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