This was really good. Disturbing, but good.

Only thing that bothered me: who was Envy talking to? It sounded like Dante, but it was a bit confusing.

Other than that, this was AWESOME.

*favs*

Very deep. I love the layout of the dialouge. It's kind of confusing, but, hey--fics are made to make people think. C;

Keep it up!