Oh please, she can heal people, change the dynamics of their powers and look into their minds better than the professor can but she couldn't keep people from finding out she was a mutant, that doesn't make any since. This is very well written but it just screams Mary Sue.

Wow! I have to admit, it makes me so happy to know someone else is writing stories about Xavier involving romance! Esp. with an OC! I love your story. Although it was pretty quick, it still gives me the mental images, like all that could really happen. . I didn't like how she helped all three at the same time, I mean...once again, it was rushed, but I love it none the less! I wonder if the students are gonna be shocked to see Xavier walk lol. Update soon? xD; Plz?

Interesting piece, nicely written.