|Reviews for When You Can Only Dream|
| SkyBlueCivic 8/7/08 . chapter 1
Ignore the bad story was good and I liked try to give more dimension to the characters,and make it a little longer.
| Hisa Kumini 6/2/08 . chapter 1
It's not bad, but I'm not going to say it's exactly good either. It's a little short, and the characters seem flat. Maybe work on giving them a bit more personality, even if it means writing a heck of a lot more to do it.
Plus, it's spelled EDI for Extreme Deep Invader.
| Delusional Illusionist 5/31/08 . chapter 1
Ignore the last review. They're wrong. You are a great writer. Seriously. I really liked this.
| Hallie Hutcherson 11/12/07 . chapter 1
I didn't like your story. No offense but it was very lame. You are not a writer. So just STOP!
Anywho. Keep your day job.
| megumisakura 8/27/07 . chapter 1
| Kakashi Kat 7/19/07 . chapter 1
I like it, it was a nice little story.