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nv650nv
2008-08-29
ch 1,
abuseGreat story, thanks =)
Supreme-Chaos-Angel
2008-07-31
ch 75,
abusewoah
even for a made up egyptian gd card, can you say unfair power much?
mind you with all the forbidden, made up, and total ignorance to the rules of the game you put in these duels, im not surprised.
especially the way iidian must have like an 80 card deck or somethn wit access to every card in the game to pull out whenever the situation calls for it. plus a bunch of made up ones and rule breakings.
Ex. defusion is a quick play spell card, which u used to counter divine wrath, a counter trap. doesnt work. its called spell speed.
also silent doom only works on normal monsters.
but i digress cause there is way too much n all ur fics to comment on.
having sad all that, you do manage to make it entertaining.
very powerful duels, which isnt too hard i guess when its basicly cheating, but still entertaining.
Metal Overlord 2.0
2008-04-03
ch 94,
abuseI am SO freaking sorry it took me this long to review the last of what has to be your best story yet (at least until I can check out Minutes to Midnight LOL). I have had a lot on my plate and still do, getting my permit, working through college, etc etc BUT I can say with confidence that the final two duels you ended this story on were worthy to be the story's climax. Marie's duel with the posessed Zane was an excellent way to not only bring back Hell-Kaiser for the fans but also to bring an end to Zell's reign of terror forever. But the final explosive duel with Illidan and Jaden was what REALLY had me spellbound, both duelists were veritable titans on the dueling world (at least in your fic anyway LOL) whose showdown was actually an even greater match up then Jaden's rematch with Zane in the finale of the first season of GX. It was a good choice to let jaden eventually claim a hard won victory as it shows how Illidan's time in the spotlight is now being shared by the newest generation of duelists, though obviously he still has plenty of fight left in him for another story LOL I can't help but wonder how you could possibly top this latest story or what threat could possibly rival Legato, Yubel? The Light of Ruin? Nightshroud? Or possibly an even darker foe of your own design? Either way I'm just happy to finally have found the time to give this story its well deserved praise. Thanks as always for a ripping good read and I hope to hear from you soon, later pal!
Aelsthla-Mental
2008-02-18
ch 94,
abusei've read all your stories, but for some reason never reviewed... ahh well.

your stories are so long, that if i had any complaints, they are gone from being so wrapped up in the story, its simply superb, i unfortunately have no constructive criticism, only simply praising you on a job well done, can't wait for the sequel (did you purposely make it the same as a Linken Park song?).

just have to say i would like to see more of Bakura's brother, although i doubt that is likely...

once again, thanks for the great story.
Okami Princess
2008-02-18
ch 94,
abuse'Chazzed Off'? SQUE! Your really gonna have 'The Chazz' duel Illidan?! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! (tackle-glomps you) I am forever in your debt! I can't wait to see it! That and Minutes to Midnight.
pink-kiss-candy
2008-02-18
ch 94,
abuseLoved it. I'm sorry I couldn't review as much as I wanted to. T^T
x-knight20
2008-02-15
ch 93,
abuseGreat chapter and story. Great way end to the a duel. ja'ne.
Knives91
2008-02-15
ch 93,
abuseIlliden done got pwned. Go short stupid person! aka Jaden.

Good stuff. More please.
sirbj
2008-02-15
ch 93,
abusehey...sorry I have been absent these last couple of chapters, but I have been busy...I liked the duels ending...it was great til the very end...Im kinda of suprise Jaden won (I thought with Illidan being the main character, that he should win, but hey, its ur story...anyways, cant wait til u post the sequel, Ill see ya then.

sirbj
Nathan
2008-02-15
ch 93, anon.
abuseExcellent finale. I really liked that the duel came down to Neos versus Dark Magician of Chaos. I don't think you could have done it any other way.

Only one thing disappointed, and that was the fact that it's over. :-( At least there's still MtM to look forward to. :-)
I can't wait to see how it turns out; I'm sure it'll be worth the wait.
JudaiAsuka-fan
2008-02-15
ch 93,
abuseGREAT! beautiful ending! really! magnificent!
And of course, I like the end of the duel ^^ Oh and the J×A hint in this chapter!
Is the sequel about GX too? I mean, again with Jaden, Alexis, Syrus, Yugi, Tea, you'll get my point. I mean all the characters in this story. (I didn't read your other stories, only this GX one.) I understand it will contail Illidan and Marie. Anyway again: I loved it.
Good luck with the sequel and everything! See you in your next story =D
Ultimate Legendary Master
2008-02-15
ch 93,
abuseAnd that's the end... It was a great story, and a wonderful trilogy. I'm really anxious to see how MtM will turn out. I guess I did expect Jaden to win this duel after all. Sure, that would work. That sucks about the filter though. 60 bucks is too expensive. Anyway, this was a great chapter and story. I'll definately be back for MtM. I wish you the best!
Ultimate Legendary Master
2008-02-11
ch 92,
abuseAnother great chapter. I thought Jaden had him that time, but now that he lost his Chaos Neos, it could be tough. Anything seems to be able to happen in this duel. The next chapter decides it all. I really don't know what's going on with the link. Your explanation may be right. Sure, email is fine. It's (this isn't my regular email, just a backup one I made.) If that doesn't work... then I don't know what to try. Anyway, another great chapter, and I'm really looking forward to see how this will end.
Knives91
2008-02-11
ch 92,
abuseHmm... they got to be running out of cards sometime soon... or at least getting low.

Good stuff. More please.
Nathan
2008-02-11
ch 92, anon.
abuseOh, MTG isn't so bad once you figure it out (however long that takes). But yeah, it is kind of an expensive hobby. :-)

Great chapter, as usual. I love the fact that Jaden survived Chaos Control's "win now" effect; it was only a matter of time before someone managed it.

Cool, Jaden has his own Chaos monster. If only Jaden somehow use Chaos Control to summon Chaos Neos. I'd love to see the look on Illidan's face. :-D

Looking forward to the finale!
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