Omg. I like ur story!! Pls write more XD.

I loved it!write more soon.

ooh!I love it.Please write more soon.

ooh please continue. wouldn't it be chocobo drawn? (the wagon)

It's good can't wait to read more...KEEP IT UP!

i have to say short but brilliant

Very good, interesting so far...KEEP IT UP!!

love this story keep up the good work
write more ashe and rasler fanfics

I love your writing style!!
I always enjoy reading prequel fics, 'specially with Ashe/Rasler pairings.
There doesnt seem to be enough.. =(
Hope you come out with next chapter soon! Looking forward to it!! ^^v

I loved it! oh I hope you don't kill Rasler off.lol I know he died in the game but it would be nice to have him live in Fanfics. Write more soon.

Please update!

wow this sounds like it's going to be an interesting story with the way it's started. it really was a shame for Rasler to die in the game. hopefully he won't die in this one because of the war? anyways, good work so far. update as soon as possible please!

I'm excited to see where this goes! I hate Rasler died in the game, so it's quite refreshing to read something where he is alive and well! Keep up the good work, and update soon!