I really like the twist ending in this chapter it gave the story a nice new flare. I applaud writers for this; you included, to have something to keep the reader interested adding this makes the story have more suspense :3 I'm looking forward to reading more.

Oh wow! This rocks my socks. I can't stop laughing, (this is a good thing) I'm really into your story and I cant wait to start reading the rest :3

I am so waiting for Rai to say "zoinks, frey! Let's get out of here!" :) I love trapdoors. Thank you for updating! I hope you find it a difficult habit to break.

p.s.- IS Rai/Freya (Fraiya?) REALLY GOING TO HAPPEN?

"You watch too many cartoons." lol

Hey! This is your new handy dandy freak here to say your story is awesome! Love the original character though am a little confused as to why she hates Rai so much...oh well cool story and up date soon please!

dun dun dun update soon

yay new chapter bin wondering If there were gunna b more chapters hope so anywayz keep it up

gasp! that was awsome! update soon

I'm so glad you're back! I love the story and and while I like Chase better the thing with Rai was very sexy! I can't wait for the next chapter.

It's funny to read how Chase can get horny. LOL. I love the stroy. Totally not Mary-Sue at all. Anyway, i'd love to read more. I really like the humor as well, it always has me laughing like a crack-head.

hope u update soon

I Love your story! And I agree that you don't neccasarily need therapy if your a goth chick, because I am one too. And as for the whole speaking-with-a-southern-drawl thing I have almost the same problem. When I'm sad or angsty I start speaking with an irish accent. Why, I have no clue. I just do.

You are soo awesome! I love your Xiaolin Showdown fics, I cannot wait for more... Ohh and I hope everything goes well with your book! Now, I'm going to go read more of your awesome works!

Please continue!

I've seen lots of other fanfics where the author is put into the show and they generally suck. But... Wow... just wow. It is very well thought out and incredibly interesting! In Short: wonderful story!

-Kat