|Reviews for Flame of Desire|
| yoh 9/3/07 . chapter 1
yoh. you need more... and the stuff aint exactly pg im sorry im not trying to be mean it was really good but maybe next time alittle longer
| Nottoca 7/25/07 . chapter 1
oh - i like! i just love the image of roy being chased around by hawkeye with flames everywhere.
| MoonStarDutchess 7/6/07 . chapter 1
Wonderful writing as usual. :)
| Perennial Rhinitis 7/5/07 . chapter 1
I find this funny. I know that this one's under Drama, but I can't help chuckling at Mustang.
| winglessfairy25 7/4/07 . chapter 1
haha. Roy really did betray Riza. that part was soo funny. Great job. they were caught red-handed. LOL
| OTP 7/3/07 . chapter 1
roy how could you sell her out like that lol wonderful job
| JenovaJuice97 7/3/07 . chapter 1
o cute i like it
| strandedthought 7/3/07 . chapter 1
poor Roy. Nicely done!
| rizahawkeye28 7/3/07 . chapter 1
I like the the did well.