SQUE! 8D Tis lovely! It makes me want to huggle Quina now. ;D And Quan is just so col. 8D He's like teh awesome. You really gave justice to these characters, Newt. :3

FLAME!! Mwah hah hah hah!! *Is promptly newted*

Well, not only are you a fantastic artist, but you've proved you have the writer's flair. ^_^__b Your story was fluid, plausible, and all the characters were written very well.

I liked the sweetness in this story especially, and I loved the ending. It made me squee.

The description was nice and not too flowery, which is what happens to some fics when the authors are really into it. *Coughs*

So, overall, this is one of the best first-time fics I've ever read. Honestly.

I really want to read more of your fiction, and I definitely think it's something you should spend time doing.

Great fic! There aren't too many about Quina or Quan, and you mananged to create one that was very well written. The characters remained in-character the whole time. You also created a good theory on the reason why Quan left.

Overall, I enjoyed the fic very much, and I hope to see more from you. :)

(One small mistake: in your author's note you say, "And Quan becomes less of a goit after he realises how wrong he was about Quan," and I think you meant to start off with Quale. No biggie, though. I just happened to notice that.)

Yay! I love Quina! And I'm of the opinion that she is indeed female, although no one else seems to know...

I loved this, really. ^^ I like the little things you slipped in about their culture, like the hats and the tongues. Whenever I see the bad grammer of a Qu, I always imagine them with a Chinese accent... so I'm secretly convinced they speak Mandarin Chinese.