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BOOMrobotdog
2009-12-23 . chapter 6
Wow, you feeling like a freaking sap or what? Happy for Christmas or something? "Everything he had ever wanted, he had. Friends, family, children, someone who loved him: he had it all. Everything was perfect.

And being a Black had never been less complicated." Not that I don't like happy. I'm all about happy. Makes my shitty life better :)

and the pacing of the last like, half, is kind of crazy-- so quick. taking test then BAM, hospital, wants lucius then BAM there he is, I love you then BAM there's the baby. lol.

I'll read butterfly later. Tomorrow is my first day of hols, but I might go shopping and stuff :) useless at work, like always. I have half an hour left, leaving like over an hour early!

Merry christmas :P
Araea Swiftwind
2009-12-23 . chapter 6
This was such a long time in coming, but it was wonderful. I loved it. I also loved that Christmas card you sent me. Thanks so much! I so enjoy beta-ing for you!
darkmoon666
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
That was rather cute, and I'm happy Harry and Lucius ended up together. I also like that Lily was supportive of Harry and Sirius - though why didnt Sirius include a real copy of Harry's birth certificate within the will as proof?
~Moony
thrnbrooke
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
I am so going to miss this story! Fantastic!
NelliGirl
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
very good ending to a wonderful story.
sernity1806
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
cookie sweet.
IchigoPudding
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
Did someone really tell you that you were working out your issues? O_o
Aww; happy ending! ^^;
Astoria :)
This McAdams dude scares me... Slightly o_@
Orion :D

~IP~
excentrykemuse
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
hurrah! a happy ending!!

congratulations on finishing *throws confetti* it's always a wonderful feeling.

loved how you slipped astoria in there.

Also, are first babies usually late? I'm the eldest and I was 3 days early (my brother, who was second, was a week late).

hmm...cheers, cen
Sacred Beast117
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
Wow great story.
I'm very glad u decided that this wasn't gonna be a one shot keep up the great work.
can't wait for more stories
DNAyres
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
About time you finished this story j/k You did a wonderful job =^_^= Thanks for the story =^_^=
sailor cyanide
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
such a sweet chapter!
DesertRoseFallen
2009-12-22 . chapter 6
I cannot believe it is over! I loved the idea surrounding this story and am pleased to say I have been a loyal follower from the start. You have done brilliant, especially in character portrayal. I hope you bring out another fiction! Well done!
jgood27
2009-12-12 . chapter 5
good story
EterNite
2009-11-29 . chapter 5
I love this story :)
bkau502
2009-11-04 . chapter 5
Ha! Finally! Fudge has it coming! But seems like he has little bit more brain then I gave him credit for, otherwise how could he think of that kind of plan? It's kinda sad that Harry and Lucius couldn't do anything against that PIG and were forced to divorce. Well, anyway, it's all over now, Fudge is rot in hell, Bella has no chance to get out, and Harry and Lucius are back together with the coming-soon child. ^^
You totally got me that one of Harry's parentage. I thought that if it's not Lily Evans maybe she got adobted into the Evans? and she was really a Black. So that would explain why Petunia so hated Harry due to her adobted sister. Really, Lily and Pet are just like black and white. Oh and Harry's eyes' color is a bit disturbing, niether the Potters or Blacks has that shade of color for the eyes, wait... or if the Potters are descendant from Slytherin so that could be possible, right? And how would that be possible that Sirius didn't mention to Harry at all that he's his son, Askaban couldn't do that much damage to his brain that he forgot about his own son, right? maybe he was oblivated? (about that part of memories of course) I'm just being curious, that's all, no offense.
Hope Harry will finally have a peaceful life which he's so desperate to have one and what that he deserves after all the things he's been through. Oh yeah! and the way Voldie died was priceless honestly! Who's ever thought he would die that way? Really. He would be rolling all over in his grave now, if he had one. Ha Ha. The all-mighty Dark Lord was hugged by one with the heart-full-of-love to death. lol. >o< ...look forward to the next chap... *blink*
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