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| laura sedai 2007-07-06 ch 1, | abuseVery good, I love the different POVs. |
| Shadowsakura321 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseso sweet, i love them together. great work! :) make more please! |
| Tigerlily Brown 2007-07-04 ch 1, | abuseSo beautiful! You're very good at telling stories from somebody else's perspective. Blond bastard lol... ;-) |
| Cherazz22784 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseMagnificient! You're amazing! You do know that right? I've been so anxious, wondering if another would arise like its predecessors and I'm so very happy that you've written another. I love the kisses and once again your wording created beautiful imagery. Really enjoyed the lines with Morris, how he likes when Doyle makes her less sad. And the scene with Jillian, catching them in the hall. How lovely! Big hugs and thanks so much for writing this gem =) |
| chipsnopotatoes 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. simply beautiful. |
| 24isthebest 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI love your series for Nadia/Doyle, and this one is no exception. Bravo. :) |
| Brooke Penelope Davis 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I loved it. I love all three of your Nadia/Doyle stories. It's great how they sort of show other people's perspectives on the Nadia/Doyle relationship, like Christine's in Hands, Chloe's in Eyes, and Morris and Jillian's in this one. The ending was really sweet, and I love the part with Jillian and the Nadia/Doyle kiss. Basically, it was really wonderful, and I loved it. |