Oh yeah, this is about the next chapter because you can't write two reviews for the same chapter. The correct "Pin Yin" for the Chinese version of Happy Birthday would be:

Zhu ni sheng ri kuai le (and this repeats four times.)

Just saying.

Ha ha ha...nice. Glad you didn't mutilate my character that badly. But there are still little things. I remember watching the movie "The Grudge". Nice movie. Much better that "The Ring". You said that I was "a little scared." Actually, I don't remember being scared at all while watching it. There were a few surprising moments, but it wasn't that scary. ...You know, in the intro, you make me kind of sound like a Satoshi fan-girl, what with including him on the list of my likes and dislikes. But other than those two instances, great job. I like how I was brought in, though, am I really that weird?

I like this story. It's good and funny and random.

And the piece of harry potter makes it amazing!

Keep going, awesome story!

The Nightmare peoples will be in here... Right?