XD when the name Vladimir came up, I cracked up, I had already made the connection.

Very funny XD

That was a nice one-shot. Very sweet, and a little sad, and kinda scary ^_^

Snow with glass mixed in...that's awful...and we all know he's just going to blame himself...

Very depressing.

Aw, so sad, no? Are you gonna continue the first chapter? And what about the last? Did jazz go blind? Cause that would kinda suck.

Belle Mort means beautiful/pretty death. It's French.
I like the twist (fluffy graveyard scene). I think this is the first time I've ever seen/read such a thing. It's rather interesting. I've sort of explored this type of writing myself once. I wrote about a person (Danny) dying on a sunny day (the weather being the out of place thing).
Anyway, great job!

That was different. I have my own version of what happened to Ember thats somehwat similar but I never pictured it liek that XD. I'll be waiting for your next oneshot

Well...

Depressing, and good. I loved it.

Also, did you ever take an art class? The opposite of red is green, and the opposite of blue is orange. Still, I've seen redheads with hair more orange than red, and it was natural. I'm not sure where that thought was going, but keep up the good work!

The chapter title is Beautiful Death.

I'm a Spanish student, and Spanish is a romantic language, so understanding other romantic languages is like looking at writing through water reflected in a funhouse mirror. That's about as close as I can come; all shimmery and distorted, but quite doable once you get the hang of it.

What language is that, anyway? I know it's not Spanish, which leaves French, Italian, and Latin. Argh...why is my brain not working today?

Belle Mort, huh. You're a very twisted person. But if no one was twisted, we'd never see different views. Thank you for this. It was quite...beautiful.

the chapter title is dead beautiful right? me and my horrible second language skills... hehe. that was really neat how you twisted the graveyard into somthing lighter and more happy.great job, it was an excelent story and i hope to see the next one soon!

~Eclipse

Omg Ive heard belle morte before but I cant remember what it means! I know ive heard it before. I absolutely love your style of writing! I guess Im a pretty twisted person when it comes to choosing stories to read if you think this is twisted XD. Ohh next chapter please! I like these little oneshots a lot!

hmm i like this... i like it a lot! i am going to make a few guesses here. i am going to say that the necklace is linked to phantoms appearence and that whoever wears it can see phantom (and he knows where they are?).. or somthing along those lines. umm another guess is that sam was wearing the necklace and she could see phantom and eather A: he murdered her or B: she commited suicide because he was threatening her or had changed for the worse?

I really liked this it was very interesting. I cant wait to see what else you come up with! Great Job!

~ghostlover

O.o Well written AND interesting. Not many stories pull off both. :D Good job.

I was a little confused at the beginning, I will say that. Maybe you should have added a page break or something to show that we were switching to a new 'scene'. I couldn't figure out how the 'dead body' was suddenly walking on the beach. It wasn't until I read the author's notes that I realized it wasn't some dream or flashforward or something. Might want to watch that in the future.

Very good characterization of Valerie however. :) I'm not much for Val fics, but this one sounds very interesting. Keep up the excellent work. I look forwards to the next chapter.

-Cori

I was a little confused at the beginning as to who was talking. At first I thought it was Sam and then you said Valerie. After that things were fairly clear. The "the eyes were different, not as luminous as she would've thought... not as green..." was kind of unnecessary since you said previously in that same paragraph that his eyes are red.
Other than that this was good. I like the mystery and intrigue. I can't wait to see what happens! So update soon!

Interesting. Definitely something I'll keep my eye on.

Is every story gonna have death in it? Please say no!