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| Phantom's Ange 2007-12-07 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting start. Very good grammar & all. I can't wait 4 the update. :D |
| Pnkrkriotgirl 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseJust happened upon your story please update soon. I can't wait to see how they interact. Will there be any romance in your story. What about the bad guy. Will it be King Voden, Zad or the priests. Can't wait to read more. |
| Hope and love 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abusei love it! |
| Marebear007 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusei normally don't like these dimensional travel fics, but yours is a good start. i'm interested to see where it's headed. i'm going to assume that ciara (which is a great name; fits in well with dar and tao's world but still modern) can hear animals talk, like dar. as far as i know, you're the first person to do that. you better have a good explanation for it! XD i have one request on that: don't make her all cool and fine with it, or dar's "pets" hanging around. she's a modern girl! she shouldn't be fine with being in the company of a wild tiger or falcon. assured that they won't hurt her, but still wary and not so comfortable. i mean, animals are in zoos where she's from. it's quite a change. i can see tao being overly curious about the first aid kit, since he's sort of a healer. if you need any help, let me know. UPDATE SOON! ps: there's a beastmaster marathon on right now, on the scifi channel. |
| Snowfire the Kitsune 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is good so far! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more! |
| Syraka 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abusesounds really good and interesting cant wait for more are voden and zad gonna make an appearance in you're fic I hope so cuz zad's funny and voden's hot in an evil kind of way XD ^-^ |