wow, that story was just amazing. i wish i could write like that! it felt like my heart was being torn out of my chest when you described how evelyn felt. one of my favorites lines has to be, '(But now he had lost his best friend, his brother.) If not by blood, then by heart.' how beautiful! that really desrcibes Danny and Rafe's relationship. and, of course, i loved the last line, so beautiful and perfectly placed. 'Shards of mirror glass scattered on the ground.' what else can i say? wow, just, wow.

I'm crying. That was exceptionally well-written. Very impressed am I.

Yo love that. What more can I say? think you were right about Rafes thoughts. Anyway thanks for read and review my story_

how sad, write more please!

I'm crying now! Nooo, :( That's so sad yet so awesome, your a great writer

omigod, it was sooo touching and well written! Honest, that was very well done! Looking forward for more of your works!

Woah, that was deep. But good. Awesome even. Awesome not like how a teenager would use it, but awe inspiring. Whatever the heck that meant. I am speachless.

that was soo sad! Poor Danny and Rafe and Evelyn